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Sweetest Treat

~ Beneath a dark and sinister sky where stars hide behind pumpkin patch wishes and ghostly dreams Ghouls and goblins cavort on this final October eve seeking candy and other sugary goodies, lest a trick be played amidst giggles and grins As I watch from eerie front porch shadows draped in faux spider webs, while my mind conjures images of a mystical faraway beauty Hypnotic eyes, peering ‘pon springtime enchantments in blue hydrangea potions of satin petals and chiffon shimmered driftings Moon glow skin, porcelain touches in angelic images, haunting desires and affectionate midnight yearnings Kisses of northern destinations, floating to waiting lips, whispering long distance promises and warming chilly smiles And I realize on this night of mischief and mayhem, Styrofoam headstones and dry ice fog, black cats and skeletons in doorways… the sweetest treat for me will always be you Happy Halloween Soupers ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/1/2019 8:32:00 AM
A fave! What a lovely concoction of eeriness mixed with romance. Love the “styrofoam headstones and dry ice fog”
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Chris Green
Date: 11/1/2019 9:01:00 AM
Thanks so much Kim. I know a lot about styrofoam headstones and dry ice fog, maybe a little too much. : )
Date: 10/31/2019 11:31:00 PM
Delightful, my friend! So much lovely imagery to paint these earthly and heavenly scenes ~ Unexpected combo, but absolutely lovely <3
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Chris Green
Date: 11/1/2019 9:00:00 AM
Thanks so much HT, I am thrilled you liked this one so much.
Date: 10/31/2019 8:19:00 PM
This was a fun read. Excellently written. Ann
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Chris Green
Date: 11/1/2019 9:00:00 AM
Thank you Ann. I am glad you liked this one.
Date: 10/31/2019 7:00:00 PM
What a lovely treat...I prefer that more than Candy...
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Chris Green
Date: 11/1/2019 9:00:00 AM
That makes two of us. : ) Thanks so much Arturo.
Date: 10/31/2019 6:18:00 PM
Wow! what a beautiful poem to end the month, the night...this is wonderfully crafted and sigh worthy... love all the halloween images weaved with the softer romantic tones throughout this piece... Goodnight my friend...Happy Halloween... :) hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 11/1/2019 8:59:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Your sweet words are always a wonderful treat for me. I appreciate you Sandy and all of the kindness you show me.
Date: 10/31/2019 5:46:00 PM
Another amazing poem Chris. So well written. I enjoyed this. I love the line pumpkin patch wishes and hope they will come about for you. Happy Halloween. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/1/2019 8:58:00 AM
Happy you liked this one my friend. Thank you so much Heidi
Date: 10/31/2019 5:41:00 PM
this is wonderful, chris! just gorgeous and so very sweet! perfect for this halloween night...
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Chris Green
Date: 11/1/2019 8:58:00 AM
Thank you Ilene for your wonderful thoughts

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