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Sweeter Than Sugar

SWEETER THAN SUGAR

Sorrows
that only love
can heal

Healing 
bridge broken hearts 
to live

Live free
on blows of joys
and see

Seeing
carefree children
on play

Playful
they run around
all day


Each day
like champagne taste
Delight!

Lighting
the dark, dark world
to grow!

Growing
to bear some fruits
so sweet...

Sweeter
than the sugar
I love.

Lovely,
I long to dream
success

Succeed
despite all odds
to share

Sharing
true love and care
World peace!

©O. E. Guillermo

Sponsor	Richard Lamoureux 
Contest Name	Mussetle Train 
Placed 6th

05:05 pm-- December 12, 2014

Copyright © Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser | Year Posted 2014

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Julia Ward Date: 3/14/2015 1:30:00 PM Your sweet poem sparkles, Olive! Julia, xx Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/15/2015 4:02:00 AM thanks much Julia.. :) God bless.. hugs.. :D!

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/11/2015 9:03:00 PM nice win....PD Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/6/2015 9:36:00 AM thanks Lolly Linda

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 1/9/2015 10:24:00 PM Your poem is sweeter than sugar, Olive, and I love the last lines...words to aspire to! Congrats!! Hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 1/10/2015 4:03:00 AM thanks much Rhonda.. :)! Happy weekend!

Kayod5 Kayode Date: 1/5/2015 11:50:00 PM Truly sweeter than sugar,congrats on this win Olive....huggs Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 1/10/2015 4:00:00 AM thanks much Kayod.. :)! GBU

Paul Callus Date: 1/5/2015 4:54:00 PM And back with bubbly congratulations, Olive_eloi!:) Let's celebrate with a nice cup of tea! hugs // paul Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 1/10/2015 4:00:00 AM yes please tea for my tummy.. :) hugs and hugs.. thanks!

Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/5/2015 3:39:00 PM Lovely piece! Congratulations. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 1/10/2015 4:00:00 AM thanks much :)!

Arlene Smith Date: 12/16/2014 7:07:00 PM Only you could turn sorrows to sugar, sweet Olive!!.. Beautiful as always!!.. Hugs... Arlene Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 12/17/2014 3:00:00 AM Thanks much Arlene.. :)! I just miss you here on Soup.. :)! maybe just i Have not be going round.. :) thanks much. :)! hugs xoxo..

Paul Callus Date: 12/14/2014 2:25:00 PM From sorrow to world peace.....lovely trip in which you look ahead with hope. Enjoyed your train ride where champagne flowed bubbly. hugs // paul Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 12/15/2014 12:25:00 AM hahhaa yes I included that set to add some lil color.. :D! thanks much PAul.. weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee hugs!!!

James Fraser Date: 12/13/2014 2:58:00 PM I love the longing in this poem, the tomorrows' the future, James :) Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 12/14/2014 11:33:00 PM thanks much JAmes.. :)! I appreciate you drop by.. :)!

David Meade Date: 12/12/2014 10:04:00 AM Outstanding my friend -- I did not want the train to stop! yes, yes, peace and love, sweeter than sugar! All the best,7 Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 12/12/2014 1:59:00 PM As much ad I want too but ot did all stop :)thanks my friend :)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/12/2014 4:02:00 AM - A sweet and lovely poem, dear Olive - "Live free .... each day, like champagne taste" :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 12/12/2014 1:58:00 PM thank You Anne Lise.. I appreciate it much.. :)!!!