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Sweeter Than Sugar

SWEETER THAN SUGAR Sorrows that only love can heal Healing bridge broken hearts to live Live free on blows of joys and see Seeing carefree children on play Playful they run around all day Each day like champagne taste Delight! Lighting the dark, dark world to grow! Growing to bear some fruits so sweet... Sweeter than the sugar I love. Lovely, I long to dream success Succeed despite all odds to share Sharing true love and care World peace! ©O. E. Guillermo Sponsor Richard Lamoureux Contest Name Mussetle Train Placed 6th 05:05 pm-- December 12, 2014

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Julia Ward
Date: 3/14/2015 1:30:00 PM
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Your sweet poem sparkles, Olive! Julia, xx
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/15/2015 4:02:00 AM
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thanks much Julia.. :) God bless.. hugs.. :D!
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Date: 1/11/2015 9:03:00 PM
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nice win....PD
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/6/2015 9:36:00 AM
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thanks Lolly Linda
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/9/2015 10:24:00 PM
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Your poem is sweeter than sugar, Olive, and I love the last lines...words to aspire to! Congrats!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/10/2015 4:03:00 AM
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thanks much Rhonda.. :)! Happy weekend!
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Date: 1/5/2015 11:50:00 PM
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Truly sweeter than sugar,congrats on this win Olive....huggs
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/10/2015 4:00:00 AM
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thanks much Kayod.. :)! GBU
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Paul Callus
Date: 1/5/2015 4:54:00 PM
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And back with bubbly congratulations, Olive_eloi!:) Let's celebrate with a nice cup of tea! hugs // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/10/2015 4:00:00 AM
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yes please tea for my tummy.. :) hugs and hugs.. thanks!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/5/2015 3:39:00 PM
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Lovely piece! Congratulations.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/10/2015 4:00:00 AM
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thanks much :)!
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Arlene Smith
Date: 12/16/2014 7:07:00 PM
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Only you could turn sorrows to sugar, sweet Olive!!.. Beautiful as always!!.. Hugs... Arlene
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/17/2014 3:00:00 AM
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Thanks much Arlene.. :)! I just miss you here on Soup.. :)! maybe just i Have not be going round.. :) thanks much. :)! hugs xoxo..
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/14/2014 2:25:00 PM
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From sorrow to world peace.....lovely trip in which you look ahead with hope. Enjoyed your train ride where champagne flowed bubbly. hugs // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/15/2014 12:25:00 AM
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hahhaa yes I included that set to add some lil color.. :D! thanks much PAul.. weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee hugs!!!
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James Fraser
Date: 12/13/2014 2:58:00 PM
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I love the longing in this poem, the tomorrows' the future, James :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/14/2014 11:33:00 PM
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thanks much JAmes.. :)! I appreciate you drop by.. :)!
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David Meade
Date: 12/12/2014 10:04:00 AM
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Outstanding my friend -- I did not want the train to stop! yes, yes, peace and love, sweeter than sugar! All the best,7
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/12/2014 1:59:00 PM
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As much ad I want too but ot did all stop :)thanks my friend :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/12/2014 4:02:00 AM
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- A sweet and lovely poem, dear Olive - "Live free .... each day, like champagne taste" :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/12/2014 1:58:00 PM
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thank You Anne Lise.. I appreciate it much.. :)!!!

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