Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Verse

Sweeter Than Sugar

SWEETER THAN SUGAR

Sorrows
that only love
can heal

Healing 
bridge broken hearts 
to live

Live free
on blows of joys
and see

Seeing
carefree children
on play

Playful
they run around
all day


Each day
like champagne taste
Delight!

Lighting
the dark, dark world
to grow!

Growing
to bear some fruits
so sweet...

Sweeter
than the sugar
I love.

Lovely,
I long to dream
success

Succeed
despite all odds
to share

Sharing
true love and care
World peace!

©O. E. Guillermo

Sponsor	Richard Lamoureux 
Contest Name	Mussetle Train 
Placed 6th

05:05 pm-- December 12, 2014

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Julia Ward March 14, 2015 at 1:30 PM Your sweet poem sparkles, Olive! Julia, xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 15, 2015 at 4:02 AM thanks much Julia.. :) God bless.. hugs.. :D!

Poet Destroyer A January 11, 2015 at 9:03 PM nice win....PD Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 6, 2015 at 9:36 AM thanks Lolly Linda

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 9, 2015 at 10:24 PM Your poem is sweeter than sugar, Olive, and I love the last lines...words to aspire to! Congrats!! Hugs, Rhonda Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 10, 2015 at 4:03 AM thanks much Rhonda.. :)! Happy weekend!

Kayod5 Kayode January 5, 2015 at 11:50 PM Truly sweeter than sugar,congrats on this win Olive....huggs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 10, 2015 at 4:00 AM thanks much Kayod.. :)! GBU

Paul Callus January 5, 2015 at 4:54 PM And back with bubbly congratulations, Olive_eloi!:) Let's celebrate with a nice cup of tea! hugs // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 10, 2015 at 4:00 AM yes please tea for my tummy.. :) hugs and hugs.. thanks!

Richard Lamoureux January 5, 2015 at 3:39 PM Lovely piece! Congratulations. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 10, 2015 at 4:00 AM thanks much :)!

Arlene Smith December 16, 2014 at 7:07 PM Only you could turn sorrows to sugar, sweet Olive!!.. Beautiful as always!!.. Hugs... Arlene Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 17, 2014 at 3:00 AM Thanks much Arlene.. :)! I just miss you here on Soup.. :)! maybe just i Have not be going round.. :) thanks much. :)! hugs xoxo..

Paul Callus December 14, 2014 at 2:25 PM From sorrow to world peace.....lovely trip in which you look ahead with hope. Enjoyed your train ride where champagne flowed bubbly. hugs // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 15, 2014 at 12:25 AM hahhaa yes I included that set to add some lil color.. :D! thanks much PAul.. weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee hugs!!!

James Fraser December 13, 2014 at 2:58 PM I love the longing in this poem, the tomorrows' the future, James :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 14, 2014 at 11:33 PM thanks much JAmes.. :)! I appreciate you drop by.. :)!

David Meade December 12, 2014 at 10:04 AM Outstanding my friend -- I did not want the train to stop! yes, yes, peace and love, sweeter than sugar! All the best,7 Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 12, 2014 at 1:59 PM As much ad I want too but ot did all stop :)thanks my friend :)

Anne-Lise Andresen December 12, 2014 at 4:02 AM - A sweet and lovely poem, dear Olive - "Live free .... each day, like champagne taste" :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 12, 2014 at 1:58 PM thank You Anne Lise.. I appreciate it much.. :)!!!