Sweet-Er Sensation

Underneath, you above,
Hold me close,like a glove,
You whisper my name,"yes love",
Meant to be,white doves....

You lean forward, I lean back,
You pull my jeans,I lift your top,
You bite your lips,I hit the spot,
We tremble like leaves,and then collapse...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Fryzel Avatar
September 18, 2012 at 1:41 AM
This is sweet I like it a lot. : ) LUV~Sammie~
Palmer Avatar
September 21, 2012 at 3:53 PM
thanks Samantha,luv Sammie
Macfarlane Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 10:01 AM
Sweet passion.....excellent write!
Palmer Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 11:03 AM
thanks Cecilia
Guzzi Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 5:47 PM
We tremble like leaves..great phrase!! steamy rhyme..Light & Love
Palmer Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 3:06 PM
thanks Debbie
Khemlani Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 1:21 AM
Soothing!
Palmer Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 5:01 AM
thanks Bhavna
Sathasivam Avatar
June 9, 2012 at 6:04 AM
Beautiful Write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing Richard.
Palmer Avatar
June 9, 2012 at 6:28 AM
thanks Ravi,happy you did
Hannah Avatar
June 5, 2012 at 6:03 PM
Wow I like it :3
Palmer Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 8:32 AM
thanks Hanna,happy to please
K Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 8:35 PM
Wow! exuberating excellence!
Palmer Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 8:58 PM
THANKS,Jesssica
Dietrich Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 2:38 PM
Yes, indeed a sweet-er sensation, Richard!
Palmer Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 4:11 PM
i was gonna name it sweet-HER,lol,thanks Andrea
Sanderson Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 8:44 AM
lol..loved it specially last verseve.. Jah' love!!! always...
Palmer Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 4:10 PM
thanks Carma,one love
Mitchell Jr. Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 8:09 PM
Nice work Richard - I enjoyed greatly. Thanks for taking the time to read my work as well.
Palmer Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 8:54 PM
thanks Anthony,you are welcome
Brown Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 9:16 AM
I have enjoyed reading your excellent writing this morning Richard. I hope you will continue to write and share your words with us for many years to come. Have a wonderful weekend filled with joy and love. Love, Carol
Palmer Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 4:50 PM
I will,thanks alot Carol
Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 8:00 AM
This is a classic piece of art you have here..enjoyed!! Very smooth!!
Palmer Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 4:50 PM
happy to please,Super Ink
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 6:39 AM
oh wow nice one Richard xx
Palmer Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 7:09 AM
Golden Girl,thanks alot
Andresen Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 6:36 AM
Sweet and romantic poem Richard, love it. - Well done. - oxox Anne-Lise
Palmer Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 7:08 AM
always like keeping you happy,thanks Anne
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