"sweet Warm Touches" - a Collaboration

“Sweet Warm Touches” – a collaboration between Michael J. Falotico & Wilma Neels

We are in a seat meant for two
our hands and hearts make the room
your scent pulls me close
until my whisper turns your head
little things told, raise your eyes
and soon our cheeks are red
our hands and arms walk as one
as we find our way to bed,
I feel the trace of your fingertips 
the sensations stirred
by the touch of your lips
the flames of the fire
a tedious contrast
to the one you are about to lit
your flighty kisses
have the remnants of floating
as you hold me close
caressing my neck
your hands explore
hidden crevices, 
unearthing emotions,
I thought I had outgrown…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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K. Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 2:19 AM
really wonderful collaboration you have here Wilma & Michael :) enjoyed this "sweet & warm" write of yours-- hope there'd be more collaboration from you 2 :) --nikko :)
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August 28, 2010 at 7:04 AM
This was so much fun Wilma, we will do it again real soon. Thanks for trusting and letting me work with you. Your a doll. Love Michael
Brown Avatar
August 26, 2010 at 10:45 AM
This is so much better then outstanding writing. It feels as if it comes straight from your hearts. ~~~Magnificent~~~ Wilma & Michael. Love, Carol
Culverhouse Avatar
August 26, 2010 at 6:03 AM
sounds good...I went to therapy yesterday and it was so nice to get a massage.
Mehta Avatar
August 25, 2010 at 7:15 PM
Hot, passionate and romantic write, Indeed, Wilma
Devonshire Avatar
August 25, 2010 at 3:03 PM
Don't even think about outgrowing those emotions, Wilma and Michael. Even in old age my father was still quite the romantic. What a terrific co-write, my friends!! Love, Carolyn
Richards Avatar
August 25, 2010 at 2:29 PM
I LOVE THAT LAST LINE!! A wonderful collaboration!! So romantic! :)
Fraser Avatar
August 25, 2010 at 12:21 PM
Lovely collaboration Wilma and Michael with this lovely poem >> James
Sweetheart Avatar
August 25, 2010 at 12:19 PM
Wow u two write so well together... amazing Wilma and each of your talent shines through in this rare beauty... enjoyed and Michael and I will be doing something together very soon too .. once I am home..luv.. ciao..
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August 25, 2010 at 11:22 AM
WOW! Wilma 2 of my favorite poets. I loved this one,, Another one of your poems going to my favs. Just out of curiosity where does Michael, part begin..enjoyed,..p.d.
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