M. L. Kiser Poet Tritina

Sweet Treats At the Sun Bakery

Honeycomb pans preheat in the sun;
filled of warm nectar so sweet; 
confection made by bees.

Cooperation among honey bees; 
bakers collaborating with sun;
produce oozing nectar, sugar-sweet.

Natures flowers, filled with liquid, sweet
thanks to numerous, hard working honey bees 
crafted in an oven of radiating sun. 

A sweet tooth has ancient sun;
Sol bakes flowing rivers, sweet; 
with the help of his buddies, the bees.

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Nette Onclaud July 16, 2017 at 2:17 PM ohh, nature so deliciously portrayed here... from flowers, the sun to bees, the mood of this splendid verse delights, M L..huggs M. L. Kiser July 16, 2017 at 2:54 PM Thank you

Demetrios Trifiatis July 16, 2017 at 7:43 AM Appetizing! We ought to be grateful to God's tireless workers the bees that toil so much for us to enjoy their nectar and because of that your poem as well dear, MLK! M. L. Kiser July 16, 2017 at 2:54 PM Ooh, Glad you feel that way and thank you.

Matthew Anish July 15, 2017 at 11:02 PM Tasty verse!! I went to a reading tonight and had some a good time. Thanks a lot for the comments on my high holiday verse. I almost always go - there is no law - however I feel that a higher power can aid in day to day existence, Peace & Love Matthew Anish M. L. Kiser July 16, 2017 at 2:56 PM Yes, it truly can; thank you so much for reading and commenting.

Alfred Berggren July 15, 2017 at 5:34 PM I like your poem because you shows the cooperation between man, nature and the bees.and too, your picture of bread items fits it all together. M. L. Kiser July 16, 2017 at 2:56 PM Thank you, Alfred.

Jan Allison July 15, 2017 at 4:29 PM A sweet write in so many ways ML I am trying to curb my sweet tooth as my hubby is now diabetic... I still have boxes of chocolates unopened from Christmas... but once they get opened it is too much temptation:-( hugs Jan xx M. L. Kiser July 15, 2017 at 4:53 PM Glad you stopped by to read and comment. One word Jan, "Stevia"; I'm not a diabetic, but I've baked for several of them. Thanks again.