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Sweet Treats At the Sun Bakery

Honeycomb pans preheat in the sun; filled of warm nectar so sweet; confection made by bees. Cooperation among honey bees; bakers collaborating with sun; produce oozing nectar, sugar-sweet. Natures flowers, filled with liquid, sweet thanks to numerous, hard working honey bees crafted in an oven of radiating sun. A sweet tooth has ancient sun; Sol bakes flowing rivers, sweet; with the help of his buddies, the bees.

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/16/2017 2:17:00 PM

ohh, nature so deliciously portrayed here... from flowers, the sun to bees, the mood of this splendid verse delights, M L..huggs

M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/16/2017 2:54:00 PM

Thank you

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/16/2017 7:43:00 AM

Appetizing! We ought to be grateful to God's tireless workers the bees that toil so much for us to enjoy their nectar and because of that your poem as well dear, MLK!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/16/2017 2:54:00 PM

Ooh, Glad you feel that way and thank you.

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/15/2017 11:02:00 PM

Tasty verse!! I went to a reading tonight and had some a good time. Thanks a lot for the comments on my high holiday verse. I almost always go - there is no law - however I feel that a higher power can aid in day to day existence, Peace & Love Matthew Anish

M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/16/2017 2:56:00 PM

Yes, it truly can; thank you so much for reading and commenting.

Alfred Berggren

Date: 7/15/2017 5:34:00 PM

I like your poem because you shows the cooperation between man, nature and the bees.and too, your picture of bread items fits it all together.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/16/2017 2:56:00 PM

Thank you, Alfred.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/15/2017 4:29:00 PM

A sweet write in so many ways ML I am trying to curb my sweet tooth as my hubby is now diabetic... I still have boxes of chocolates unopened from Christmas... but once they get opened it is too much temptation:-( hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/15/2017 4:53:00 PM

Glad you stopped by to read and comment. One word Jan, "Stevia"; I'm not a diabetic, but I've baked for several of them. Thanks again.