Olusegun Arowolo Poet Tanka

Sweet Thrills

My lips parted ways
As her bazooms touched my chest,
this unusual state
is killing and intriguing,
cold sweat drops, as sweet thrills move.



Olusegun Arowolo
04/11/12
Contest:'1-6 lines of Romance&Love' Sponsored by Russel Sivey

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Gwendolen Song April 20, 2012 at 4:13 PM A great moment caught in a tanka! Enthralled with this write, Olusegun. Wonderful win. Gwendolen

Gwendolen Song April 20, 2012 at 4:12 PM Muchos romance in this heated write, Olusegun...Congrats to a wonderful moment in tanka...Gwendolen

Carol Sunshine Brown April 16, 2012 at 1:29 PM Congratulations on your placement in Russell's "1-6 Lines of Romance and Love" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich April 15, 2012 at 7:37 PM Woa!!! what a sweet thrill that is!!! Congrats on this one, my friend.

Ralph Taylor April 15, 2012 at 5:43 PM Congrats on your win, Olusegun. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph

Wilma Neels April 15, 2012 at 2:00 PM A sultry write Olusegun ;) congratulations on your win ;)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 15, 2012 at 8:14 AM congrats Olusegun on a fantastid write and win.. such energy and vibrant visuals.. bazoom.....

Deborah Burch April 15, 2012 at 4:49 AM OA!! Congratulations on your win!!! well done with this sultry piece...big hugs,love deb