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Sweet Terrain

Constantly down shifting Riding the clutch Can’t get higher than 2nd Too much traffic keeping me from you My mind is racing If only these cars would Stalled on this exchange Thinking about getting to you Taking this exit No congestion here GPS working well I’ll be there quicker Finally, shifting to 5th Giving the clutch a rest Driving as fast as my mind thinks To be with you I’ll pick you up Let’s take a drive in the country Study the trees and the sweet terrain Behind us small in the rear view mirror We can park in the shade Walk through the tall Midwest grass Wade in the cool creek You are my sweet terrain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/9/2009 10:21:00 AM
Interesting piece. I love the flow of this piece and the way you linked the final verse with the first verse. Keep writing. you are great! Adeleke
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