Sweet Talking, Sleepwalking

Dreaming,
When a peach smile hangs on moonbeam
How the roses become your christened lips,
While I hold my restrained gleam 
My sleepwalking queen.

Pearl dew, 
Let’s douse in slow-drags, made for two 
While curls of tossed hair perfumes air of bay
I feel the blue night of you
Blue night so, so new. 

...And when grasses breathe long
Just linger by my side,
Let time not wait...
For you are my one song;
Here, stardust abides
On wisps of soft jazz rides...

Come, love
Dusk bears new morns ; I’m yours, love
As glow of whispers light fireflies
Sweet talking , I’ll leave no more sighs
No, no goodbyes.


*inspired by musical versions of Johnny and Santo,
 Ventures,  and Jeff Beck


Sleepwalk Contest of Craig Cornish
by nette onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 7:45 AM
Congratulations on your win in Craig's "Sleepwalk" contest Nette. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
November 3, 2012 at 2:26 PM
Congrad's on your win SO glad to be back! Light & Love
Grisetti Avatar
November 3, 2012 at 1:01 PM
Congratulations on your win.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 3, 2012 at 6:21 AM
Big congrats on a beautiful write and win nette xx
Dietrich Avatar
November 3, 2012 at 2:18 AM
very well deserved win . BIG congrats to you, Nette.
Sweetheart Avatar
November 3, 2012 at 1:05 AM
CONGRATS NETTE LUV ON A MAGNIFICENT SET OF LYRICAL WORDS TO SLEEPWALK MELODY AND A FABULOUS WIN TOO .. WOW
Gasun Avatar
November 3, 2012 at 12:50 AM
Both you're such a great poet and song writer, Nette! I really love it! So beautiful! Congratulations on your win! hugs:) Leonora/Norie
Roberts Avatar
November 3, 2012 at 12:22 AM
Congratulations Nette.....Seren
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November 2, 2012 at 6:12 PM
Hi Nette, congratulations with your awesome poem in Craig's "Sleepwalk" contest :-) take care~PD
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October 16, 2012 at 7:20 PM
An awesome poem you have penned and good luck in the contest. Always a pleasure to read your poetry. love phyl
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October 14, 2012 at 7:52 PM
NETTE, your poem is awesome, thank you for sharing your pen.. always :-) PD
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October 14, 2012 at 1:22 PM
Andrea is right. You do this form so well. Love how your words spill and flow where they are supposed too. Hugs n a kiss on the cheek. Luv Michael
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October 14, 2012 at 12:00 PM
This is spectacular my friend, simply wonderful! I really enjoyed this very delightful and intriguing poem! You have written a fabulous and amazing write Nette! I love your descriptions you have so illustriously portrayed withing this wondrous poem! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!
Dietrich Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 11:22 AM
This is lovely, Nette. You do this form of poetry very well. I hope to try it today as well.
Sweetheart Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 9:40 AM
I TRIED FOR 15 MINUTES LAST NIGHT TO COMMENT ON THIS WRITE NETTE LUV .. SO FRUSTRATING .. WHAT IS GOING ON WITH PS??? GRAND WORDS AS ALWAYS WITH YOUR CERTAIN FLARE OF CREATIVE AURA .. HAPPY SUNDAY ..
Kendrick Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 7:23 AM
Great work that you have penned for the contest..Good luck in the contest..I haven't been able to wrap my brain around an idea to pen for the Sleepwalk contest..Thanks for stopping by..Your kind reviews are always uplifting..Sara
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October 14, 2012 at 2:46 AM
‡ If I Were To End This Your Amazing Poetic Read At The Close Of Merely Stanza One, Sweet Beautiful Nette, My Heart Would Smile To Be Content. But Alas, Beauty Shall Not Stop There. Smile, Upon Completion As I Believed, Your Beauty, Coloured The World A Canvas !mid This, A Spectacular Love's Cabaret. I Love It When My Spirit Twines Within Anothers Heart ? If I Could Try And Describe It In But One Word - 'Ecstasy.' A Beautiful Favourite By An Extremely Gifted, Beautiful Girl. Love, Rachel ‡
Horsman Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 2:45 AM
what can one say, but only echo the accolades of comments past, your words are truly gracious as is your pen, and the soul that drives it....
Poet Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 1:23 AM
Amazing poetry here by You Nette!A great entry to the contest!
Poet Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 1:20 AM
Yes I am first!
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