Sweet Surrender

I long to hold you

until 
you melt like warm chocolate
in a warm sun,

until

I am filled
with your sweetness,

until

you know
the truth 
of my words,

until
the craving is satisfied,
and I melt like warm chocolate
in a warm sun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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