Sweet Surrender

Sleep's the only escape he delights in.
A lullaby eases his pain.
Please dont wake him, let him sleep.



AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 2:04 AM
I can only guess you are talking about nurses in a hospital for they can never let anyone sleep. It is their job to wake people up seconds after they snooze off.
Gauthier Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 2:17 AM
You are tight about the hospital environment. Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren.
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