sweet sunset hiku

the butterscotch sun 

          m e l t i n g  in cinnamon skies . . .

chocolate mountains

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Date: 5/2/2025 12:59:00 PM
Blowing kisses at your poem! Delicious mmm… Congrats!
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Date: 2/3/2020 4:22:00 AM
I am back reading this. I love it. Ate too much of it yesterday. Again, sweet temptation ...
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Date: 1/29/2020 4:46:00 PM
Dropping back to say many congratulations on your win Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/29/2020 10:49:00 AM
A delicious offering, Andrea... Congratulations on your podium finish. Regards // paul
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Date: 1/29/2020 3:28:00 AM
- Congratulations on your sweet nature themed haiku, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/29/2020 1:18:00 AM
Absolutely delicious! Congratulations my friend! Love all three flavors!
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Date: 1/29/2020 1:14:00 AM
Back with congrats..
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Date: 1/28/2020 7:56:00 PM
Very nice, Andrea. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/28/2020 5:52:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your winning placement with your deliciously descriptive haiku!
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Date: 1/28/2020 6:36:00 AM
Sweet imagery... Good luck in the contest..
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Date: 1/27/2020 6:32:00 PM
Don't know whether to read this or eat it...lol Wonderful write..
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Date: 1/27/2020 10:09:00 AM
This reminds me of cinnamon rolls, oddly enough. Great imagery.
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Date: 1/27/2020 9:10:00 AM
Delightful, Andrea--so descriptive and YUMMY! :-) Janice
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Date: 1/27/2020 5:30:00 AM
I never thought of a chocolate sky, but it must be paradise ...
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/27/2020 11:23:00 AM
chocolate mountains
Date: 1/26/2020 7:25:00 AM
Superb imagery, Andrea--all the best.
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Date: 1/26/2020 6:18:00 AM
Let's hope it's a good summer... Nice imagery
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Date: 1/25/2020 11:37:00 PM
Nice, now you got me in the mood for a chocolate bar. Good luck Tom
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Date: 1/25/2020 9:42:00 PM
Now I'm hungry, lol... Great job finding creative colors to describe a sunset!
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Date: 1/25/2020 7:12:00 PM
mmm this is so tasty Andrea!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/25/2020 6:36:00 PM
gorgeous Andrea....love this :) hugs
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Date: 1/25/2020 6:29:00 PM
Delicious, Andrea. Top chef worthy.
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Date: 1/25/2020 5:59:00 PM
yum!!! :)
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