Sweet Sun

False dawn scouts creep eerily through the mists
dance on the cooling surface of moonlight
nudge nocturne musicians through final riffs
to tease the crusted eyes of daybreak’s sight.

Awake!!  Soft breezes call to rippled shores
 beseeching all to greet their rising king
in hum, in chirp, in open petal doors
a welcome to this cacophonic fling.

So bathe within the flame of sunshine’s lust
impregnate frozen dreams long dormancy
rejoice in bringing forth earth’s budding thrust
welcome the loving touch of passing bee.

Sweet sun, you arc across a future’s sky
fade beneath the moonlight’s reverent sigh.


©3/5/2018

submitted to – Sunshine Sonnet – Poetry Contest
sponsor – John Hamilton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 9:53 PM
A most pleasant read. Congrats on your win, John.
Hamilton Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 10:48 AM
Loved the last couplet most of all, brilliant sonnet, congrats John on a nice win!
Smith Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 12:45 PM
Brilliant sonnet John, sure to do well...
Lawless Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 5:21 PM
thanks Charlie, glad you liked it..
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