Sweet Sugar
sweet tasting sugar
the icing
on the cake
darling been out
almost all day
fixing the car
lost complete power
coming up
a hill
falling speed
to ten mile
an hour
we striped
down the turbo
nothing wrong
then ran into
the town
to get a new
filter and some oil
because like
an idiot
i did not
check it
in a while
silly clown
i thought to myself
just shaking
my head disgusted
with a big red nose
what the hell
is wrong
with me
not thinking
of checking
the oil
as i always do
ended up
after quite a few
hours of work
it was something
really simple
but at least
the car
got a good service
now i am
laughing to myself
thought all
the time thinking
it was something
very serious
how has
your day been
sweetheart i covered
everything on
my side smiling
missing you
baby beautiful
with icing
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