Sweet Storm

Sweet Storm!

The storm was so wonderful.., 
so much that it made me blissful! 

never know what it is like a daze, 
may be as I always lived in my own cage! 

was such a storm for all to wait, 
is making it all now almost straight! 

a feel nothing of bad, 
but something as a needy rude! 

the winds were so calm, 
the beginning with such a claim! 

the end sure was a sweet storm, 
now making it all get a reform!

Siddartha Montik
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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July 3, 2024 at 3:04 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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