Sweet Spot
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Laughter, will be found, in our happily ever after.
— by poet
sweet spot
saint’s laughter -
glory giggles.
spirit
hits the sweet spot -
uncontrollable
uproar of
passion.
no letdown
in sight.
the tears flow -
they’re holy.
a relationship
with Jesus - not boring.
joy
in the smile of Christ.
12/9/2022
Writing Challenge - Yalto Form
Sponsor: Constance LaFrance
Used HMS
Yalto is a form created by Edward Ibeh, a PoetrySoup member
3, 4, 2, 4, 5, 3, 2, 3 ,2, 3, 3, 5, 6, 1, 5 syllables
Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2022
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