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Sweet Spot

Laughter, will be found, in our happily ever after.

— by poet

sweet spot saint’s laughter - glory giggles. spirit hits the sweet spot - uncontrollable uproar of passion. no letdown in sight. the tears flow - they’re holy. a relationship with Jesus - not boring. joy in the smile of Christ. 12/9/2022 Writing Challenge - Yalto Form Sponsor: Constance LaFrance Used HMS
Yalto is a form created by Edward Ibeh, a PoetrySoup member 3, 4, 2, 4, 5, 3, 2, 3 ,2, 3, 3, 5, 6, 1, 5 syllables
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La France Avatar
January 2, 2023 at 1:19 PM
Kim, a wonderful Yalto poem, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Yalto Form, well done, I love the image and your quote too, Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
January 2, 2023 at 5:23 PM
Thank you, Constance! :)
Kitchin Avatar
December 21, 2022 at 6:03 PM
Kim, wonderfully penned, congratulations on your winning placement!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 2, 2023 at 5:23 PM
Thank you, Tania!
Andresen Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 10:31 AM
- Congratulations on your win :) - A wonderful poem, Kim :) - I wish you a lovely Christmas :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
January 2, 2023 at 5:23 PM
Thank you, Anne Lise! I hope you have had a wonderful holiday! Happy New Year!
Kendrick Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 4:48 AM
Congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. I like the touch of faith contained within. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 7:56 AM
Thank you, sweet Sara! Merry Christmas!
Alex Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 12:55 AM
Joy is shown through this special form. Congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 7:56 AM
Thank you, Christuraj!
Ibeh Avatar
December 19, 2022 at 4:03 PM
Excellent, Kim:-) You do Yaltos very well! Love this one. Congratulations on your top win!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 19, 2022 at 6:53 PM
Thank you so much! Honored that you think so, Edward. God bless and Merry Christmas!
Proxenos Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 6:19 AM
What a wonderful tribute to our afterlife and what we should expect and experience. I need to fave this and read it when I have a gloomy day, for what is to happen to us is just so unbelievably beautiful. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 11:08 AM
Thank you so much! Hugs and blessings to you too! xoxo
DiMino Avatar
December 10, 2022 at 12:42 PM
Beautiful! Wonderful message! Truth abounds!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 10, 2022 at 3:55 PM
Thank you, Joe!
Buhagiar Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 11:04 PM
Very inspiring and spiritual. Hope all are well at home. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 10, 2022 at 3:56 PM
Things are fine. Busy week. Hugs and thank you!
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