Sweet Sorrow - Revised
Their "Love-Life" was in trouble.
It was bogus from the start.
It never should have happened.
It wasn't all that smart.
These two were not compatable,
but they were not aware!
They ignored the obvious,
it seems they didn't care!
The "romance" began to slowly fade.
Things turned bitter-sweet.
Love just never happened
it ended in defeat!
They learned about love the hard way.
A lesson of sweet-sorrow!
They'll be more cautious next time
so they can have a sweet tomorrow!
Post Comments
Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.
Please
Login
to post a comment
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a
Premium Membership.
