Sweet Shots

Dessert Hot double fudge Chocolate, walnut, sweet Good when shared with a friend or Lover (Cinquain, traditional)

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James Fraser

Date: 9/6/2009 8:29:00 AM

Yummy piece Sara, James

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 9/6/2009 5:36:00 AM

This poem is just wonderful. It flows like an Epulaeryu. You should write one too. I would love it! Great job! ~Joseph

Brian Strand

Date: 9/6/2009 12:26:00 AM

Tasty words Sara.Rgds Brian

Jayne Eggins

Date: 9/6/2009 12:17:00 AM

LOL its late afternoon in australia your making me hungry ;) great write .. kind regards Jayne

Tim Ryerson

Date: 9/5/2009 1:53:00 PM

Wow, Sarah...THAT was a good one! (as are all your others) Just sent you a Soup mail - Tim

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/5/2009 11:51:00 AM

Delicious cinquain Sara...Raul

John Freeman

Date: 9/5/2009 11:28:00 AM

I am happy for you , hearing about your grandson. Prayer does work, praise the Lord! Your cinquain, chocolate is, as I understand, an aphrodisiac in itself, In keeping with your verse's last stanza. God bless, Sincerely Moses

P Sheart

Date: 9/5/2009 11:02:00 AM

A Yummy Cinquain sweet sara! Thanks for your comments. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/5/2009 10:50:00 AM

Tasty poem! I feel like I gained some weight reading it! Keep up the fine work! Yours Matthew Anish