Sweet Shots

Dessert
Hot double fudge
Chocolate, walnut, sweet
Good when shared with a friend or 
Lover

(Cinquain, traditional)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
September 6, 2009 at 8:29 AM
Yummy piece Sara, James
Spence Sr Avatar
September 6, 2009 at 5:36 AM
This poem is just wonderful. It flows like an Epulaeryu. You should write one too. I would love it! Great job! ~Joseph
Strand Avatar
September 6, 2009 at 12:26 AM
Tasty words Sara.Rgds Brian
Eggins Avatar
September 6, 2009 at 12:17 AM
LOL its late afternoon in australia your making me hungry ;) great write .. kind regards Jayne
Ryerson Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 1:53 PM
Wow, Sarah...THAT was a good one! (as are all your others) Just sent you a Soup mail - Tim
Moreno Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 11:51 AM
Delicious cinquain Sara...Raul
Freeman Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 11:28 AM
I am happy for you , hearing about your grandson. Prayer does work, praise the Lord! Your cinquain, chocolate is, as I understand, an aphrodisiac in itself, In keeping with your verse's last stanza. God bless, Sincerely Moses
Sheart Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 11:02 AM
A Yummy Cinquain sweet sara! Thanks for your comments. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
Anish Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 10:50 AM
Tasty poem! I feel like I gained some weight reading it! Keep up the fine work! Yours Matthew Anish
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