Sweet Secrets

Golden leaves adrift
             
             autumn wind blows soft kisses
                            
                          whispers sweet secrets
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 5:45 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Seasons Senryu" Audrey. Love, Carol
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June 20, 2010 at 9:08 PM
Very nice image of the oncoming Fall and its soft winds blowing! Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
Dietrich Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 5:00 PM
So gentle and sweet this one. Leaves ya a bit breathless!
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June 18, 2010 at 8:09 PM
Nice and light in it's tone.and it should edmbellish a picture, perhaps. It has the Reader's Digest or the old Saturday Evening Post aspect to it. I'll try again, Audrey, in any case, Best wishes to youand Jimmy and Godspeed. Gerard.
K. Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 8:09 PM
very beautiful senryu, Audrey :) each line was such a lovely testament to autumn... also like how you formatted it :) --nikko :)
Green Avatar
June 16, 2010 at 10:00 PM
Dreamy, yeah- exactly. Beautiful. Congrats on your win!
Sweetheart Avatar
June 16, 2010 at 8:52 PM
Congrats BBF on your success in my contest.. with this wonderful entry.. also appreciate your support of my contests.. with luv.. "Sweetheart"
Fraser Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 3:04 PM
Although it's about Autumn, it's incredibly dreamy Audrey >> James
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June 14, 2010 at 12:09 AM
Love the contrast in line 2/3 Audrey.One for my favourites.Rgds Brian
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June 13, 2010 at 12:50 AM
I love this, Audrey. So far I only saw autumn from you (other than myself) This is tough competition for me. haha. Excellent imagery. LUv, Andrea ps. thanks for doing my blog question. Stay posted for results of your choice!
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June 12, 2010 at 8:13 PM
Smile! Wow, this is very soft and beautiful ~ A reflection of Your Precious Heart I believe....Smile, I just can't seem to shake Your splendors here today dear ~ Smile, You must be inspired--"Good!!" ~ Again, "Brushed Beautifully!!" ~ "My Love As Always," John! ~ Smile, "Bye Again!":) ~
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June 12, 2010 at 5:03 PM
That's my favorite season, too, Audrey. And I'm so delighted you are now enjoying the benefits of premium membership. A Soup Fairy is watching over you, dear. Love, Carolyn
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