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Sweet Secrets

Golden leaves adrift
             
             autumn wind blows soft kisses
                            
                          whispers sweet secrets

Copyright © Audrey Haick | Year Posted 2010

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 6/21/2010 5:45:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Seasons Senryu" Audrey. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Daniel Cwiak Date: 6/20/2010 9:08:00 PM Very nice image of the oncoming Fall and its soft winds blowing! Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/19/2010 5:00:00 PM So gentle and sweet this one. Leaves ya a bit breathless! Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 6/18/2010 8:09:00 PM very beautiful senryu, Audrey :) each line was such a lovely testament to autumn... also like how you formatted it :) --nikko :) Login to Reply

Gerard Keogh Jr. Date: 6/18/2010 8:09:00 PM Nice and light in it's tone.and it should edmbellish a picture, perhaps. It has the Reader's Digest or the old Saturday Evening Post aspect to it. I'll try again, Audrey, in any case, Best wishes to youand Jimmy and Godspeed. Gerard. Login to Reply

Amy Green Date: 6/16/2010 10:00:00 PM Dreamy, yeah- exactly. Beautiful. Congrats on your win! Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 6/16/2010 8:52:00 PM Congrats BBF on your success in my contest.. with this wonderful entry.. also appreciate your support of my contests.. with luv.. "Sweetheart" Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 6/15/2010 3:04:00 PM Although it's about Autumn, it's incredibly dreamy Audrey >> James Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 6/14/2010 12:09:00 AM Love the contrast in line 2/3 Audrey.One for my favourites.Rgds Brian Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/13/2010 12:50:00 AM I love this, Audrey. So far I only saw autumn from you (other than myself) This is tough competition for me. haha. Excellent imagery. LUv, Andrea ps. thanks for doing my blog question. Stay posted for results of your choice! Login to Reply

John Rhinem Date: 6/12/2010 8:13:00 PM Smile! Wow, this is very soft and beautiful ~ A reflection of Your Precious Heart I believe....Smile, I just can't seem to shake Your splendors here today dear ~ Smile, You must be inspired--"Good!!" ~ Again, "Brushed Beautifully!!" ~ "My Love As Always," John! ~ Smile, "Bye Again!":) ~ Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 6/12/2010 5:03:00 PM That's my favorite season, too, Audrey. And I'm so delighted you are now enjoying the benefits of premium membership. A Soup Fairy is watching over you, dear. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply