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Sweet Reverie

For many years I dared to dream that in your eyes there'd be a gleam. A light of passion meant for me that would burn for all eternity. No greater love shall ever be much sweeter than my reverie. December 3, 2022 Bitesize Poem No56 Contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Date: 12/16/2022 1:52:00 AM
Beautiful Jenna. Sop much in just six lines
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Date: 12/13/2022 12:36:00 AM
Love the rhyme, a beautiful flow, smoother than free verse but much more poetic. Commitment perSONified.
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Date: 12/12/2022 7:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place in Line's contest!
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Date: 12/12/2022 6:28:00 AM
Always the best. Congratulations!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/12/2022 6:49:00 AM
Thanks so much, Chris.
Date: 12/12/2022 3:48:00 AM
Well done my new Sis! Congrats!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/12/2022 6:04:00 AM
;) Thanks, Bobby Bro.
Date: 12/11/2022 7:37:00 PM
awesome poem, Congrats!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/12/2022 6:04:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea.
Date: 12/11/2022 6:52:00 PM
With all its simplicity, you conveyed the heart of your poem in profound sublimity. Congratulations.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/12/2022 6:04:00 AM
Thanks very much, JCB.
Date: 12/11/2022 2:47:00 PM
Oh the yearning - nicely expressed - congrats
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/12/2022 6:04:00 AM
Thank you, Sean.
Date: 12/4/2022 11:18:00 AM
This is sweet and inspirational...loving the last two lines..Hope all is well Jenna.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/5/2022 4:59:00 AM
Thank you. All is well with me.
Date: 12/3/2022 12:55:00 PM
Requited love fire is a universal dream, JL. Good luck with that. ~;o)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/4/2022 4:10:00 AM
Thank you, AP.

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