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Sweet Remembrance of Christmas

The gold house, silence The silver snow, piling steadily where you Last left your footprints Before you went I dreamt Life in its past form, all those years ago When we were young When we had troubles to face with the wind and its harsh chase you stepped into the cold without a word waved goodbye smiling like an angel of the North Star Now, surrounded by others their laughter, the gentle flame that washes away the shadows the sadness, the uncertainty. Christmas is never the same But I can see all the ones before I hear the children's joy, the stories shared once more Another year has passed Let us be together Let us embrace the warmth Let us live this dream.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/18/2015 11:36:00 PM
Great take with this lovely song Mutsuki.. Congrats on big win!
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Date: 12/18/2015 9:59:00 PM
Mutsuki, Congrats.... LINDA
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Date: 12/17/2015 4:48:00 PM
Mutsuki, congrats. SKAT
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Date: 12/16/2015 9:03:00 PM
MUTSUKI, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 12/15/2015 7:28:00 PM
Mutsuki, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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