Sweet Relief

Balanced on a wire so sharp ---
I wince each time I breathe ---
A sudden exit from my life,
would bring such sweet relief.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Fraser Avatar
November 9, 2009 at 2:06 PM
Powerful dramatic verse Sheol >> James
Kendrick Avatar
November 6, 2009 at 11:38 AM
Definitely dramatic. Hope a topic and a fact of life. Keep writing. Sara
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace