Sweet Raspberry Kisses

Baby, when you’re grown
cradling your own darling babe.
Remember your days
of sweet raspberry kisses,
rhymes and twinkling lullabies.

I will remember
the sweet sound of your babble
through bubbling laughter, 
your pudgy, little fingers  
and wide-eyed wonder, always.


for Andrea Dietrich's SWEET or SALTY? Contest,
10/17/13
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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November 7, 2013 at 11:57 AM
Hi Rhonda,*nice* SWEET Or SALTY win................... HUGS ~SKAT~
A   Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 7:22 PM
Rhonda, Congratulations On your way to xool Sweet & Sour win... always~ Linda aka PD
Onclaud Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 11:27 AM
this delights, rhonda..happy cheers to you for your win!..:) huggs
Kendrick Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 8:20 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara
Guzzi Avatar
November 5, 2013 at 3:39 PM
Gotta love a baby poem any kind! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
May Avatar
November 5, 2013 at 12:23 PM
wonderful wtite...congrats on your win
Johnson Avatar
November 5, 2013 at 11:13 AM
A sweetheart of an entry. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Jones Avatar
November 5, 2013 at 10:37 AM
Lovely poem....congratulations... raspberry kisses are priceless....
Bauer Avatar
November 5, 2013 at 9:07 AM
so tender and heart-warming! congratulations on your win...
Dietrich Avatar
November 5, 2013 at 7:53 AM
This one was adorable. So glad it's you on my list!! Congratulations. Yes, the baby's lips look just like cute sweet raspberries.
Ruebel Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 12:28 PM
Just beautiful hon. This is a keeper. Lov, Shar
Bantawa Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 12:37 AM
nice 1
Sivey Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 10:12 PM
I loved reading this illustrious write here this evening my friend! You have perfect syllable count within this wondrous poem! You have portrayed the love of a parent with their child! What a astounding piece, Great Work!!
Mehta Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 10:03 PM
Nice tanks on sweet, Rhonda
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