Carole Duet Poet Lanterne

Sweet Poet

Love,
 and truth,
 close to heart,
 your poetry,
 art.

 Red,
 and blue,
 me and you,
 a dream come true,
 when?

You,
my muse,
so sincere,
so please come here,
soon.

Pen,
of gold,
will be bold,
on paper white,
told.

Kind,
and smart,
tortured heart,
I understand.
Life.



Copyright:  April 25, 2017

For:  Lanterne Frenzy contest #2

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Maria Williams July 11, 2017 at 6:24 AM Oh so this is a lanterne? How beautiful and your words - how they shine!! I really love what you've done with this Carole...Maria Carole Duet July 13, 2017 at 12:24 AM Thanks, Maria. Yes, I find the lanterne one of the easier forms. Anyway, glad you "loved" it. Carole Duet :)

Darlene De Beaulieu May 11, 2017 at 7:05 PM I like this poem that you wrote.A 7 Carole Duet May 12, 2017 at 2:09 PM Thank you, Darlene. I'm so glad you liked it. Carole Duet

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri April 29, 2017 at 12:44 AM Wow this is gorgeous , romantic and appealing. Awesome formatting as well. Kudos. Carole Duet April 29, 2017 at 5:44 PM Wow! Thank you so much Zaynab. I'm so glad you liked it. Carole Duet

Edward Mccall April 27, 2017 at 11:03 PM What a sweet piece of poetry into my favorites it goes. Good luck in the contest. Carole Duet April 28, 2017 at 2:32 AM Thank you, Edward. :)

Darren White April 27, 2017 at 8:33 AM Wonderful lanternes, Carole! They fit so wonderfully together, great write, and good luck in the contest. Carole Duet April 27, 2017 at 9:13 PM Thank you, Darren.

Jan Allison April 25, 2017 at 6:59 PM a lovely string of lanterne poems which flow so beautifully and on a subject I relate to so well!:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xxx Carole Duet April 26, 2017 at 1:09 PM Thank you so much, Jan.

Heidi Sands April 25, 2017 at 9:13 AM Nice one Carole ! Good luck in the contest :) Carole Duet April 25, 2017 at 6:42 PM Thank you, Heidi.

Agnes Krampe April 25, 2017 at 7:17 AM I like how you sequenced your lanternes and how your poem flows. Good luck in the contest. Carole Duet April 25, 2017 at 6:43 PM Thank you, Agnes. Carole Duet

Probir Gupta April 25, 2017 at 6:42 AM Beautifully executed Lanterne ... Looks a winner ... Carole Duet April 25, 2017 at 6:44 PM Thank you, Probir. Carole Duet

Chris Green April 25, 2017 at 5:51 AM A fantastic piece of writing. The form is spot on and the subject one that really touches the reader. Your heart shines in this one Carole. Carole Duet April 25, 2017 at 6:50 PM Thank you so much, Chris. Carole Duet

White Wolf April 25, 2017 at 2:13 AM Wow, Carole! A very impressive set of lanternes! The very best of luck to you! Carole Duet April 25, 2017 at 6:55 PM P.S. And good luck to you too! :) Carole Duet April 25, 2017 at 6:54 PM Thank you, Museo!