Sweet Nothings

I’d like to whisper sweet nothings in your ear
My little chocolate almond butter cup oh dear
Don’t mind me if I turn up a little sweet heat
Little toasted chestnut your good enough to eat

Ooh! I do like it like that my sexy stallion mare 
I’ll moan as you run a gentle finger through my hair
Come fire up my griddle my tasty succulent spar rib
Come warm my lips and fire up this flaunting squib

Let me feel my manhood running through your holy chapel
Let me take a bite of your moist and shiny apple Adam to Eve
I will stimulate your senses melt you in the mirror of my eyes
Finding your way to my soul taunting my lion to tantalize your 
Piscean fish, shifting the yolk of your soul an extracted albumin
Without your protein I am weak, like an infant I cling to bosom

Gently crumbling your fortune cookie, I am unfurling love notes
As I climb your great walls of China, we both melt like icecream
Betwixt the raw of lion and lioness, we climb albion cliffs as one

Written by: Elliott &Vienna 
May 21, 2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Irisha Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 7:57 AM
Um...you made me hungry...lol...good job. :0)
Baxter Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 2:36 AM
Oh I LOVED this. I mean all of it. :D Red
Kyriacou Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 1:26 AM
hahaah wow that's pretty good.. I enjoyed that xD haahha nice imagery... you've mastered that poem xD
Collins Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 8:39 AM
Now that I've taken a cold shower I must say you two are a pair made in heaven. More more. love, Kathy
Kapoor Avatar
May 26, 2012 at 11:07 PM
Great collaboration in tune with a flow and beauty on the theme. Thanks for your comment on my new Poem. Love and best wishes...Ravindra
Garside Avatar
May 25, 2012 at 6:00 PM
A great piece, thank you for sharing it with us. Well done to the both of you!
Andresen Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 10:52 AM
Elliott & Vienna that is what we call great cooperation !!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
Onclaud Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 8:02 AM
a poetic delicacy made by two talented wordsmiths.. much enjoyed, elliott!..:) hugs!
Desai Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 12:53 AM
lovely, great read :-) by the way deathland part two is now ready please tell me what you think didnt know how to drop you a message..thanks have a nice day..Sam
Harrell Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 8:58 PM
"I liked it, Elliott- very flowery words."
Dietrich Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 8:57 PM
great imagery and I loved the rhyming you mixed into it!! Schweet!!
Cooper Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 8:38 PM
very well penned.
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