Get Your Premium Membership

Sweet Nothings

I’d like to whisper sweet nothings in your ear My little chocolate almond butter cup oh dear Don’t mind me if I turn up a little sweet heat Little toasted chestnut your good enough to eat Ooh! I do like it like that my sexy stallion mare I’ll moan as you run a gentle finger through my hair Come fire up my griddle my tasty succulent spar rib Come warm my lips and fire up this flaunting squib Let me feel my manhood running through your holy chapel Let me take a bite of your moist and shiny apple Adam to Eve I will stimulate your senses melt you in the mirror of my eyes Finding your way to my soul taunting my lion to tantalize your Piscean fish, shifting the yolk of your soul an extracted albumin Without your protein I am weak, like an infant I cling to bosom Gently crumbling your fortune cookie, I am unfurling love notes As I climb your great walls of China, we both melt like icecream Betwixt the raw of lion and lioness, we climb albion cliffs as one Written by: Elliott &Vienna May 21, 2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/19/2012 7:57:00 AM
Um...you made me hungry...lol...good job. :0)
Login to Reply
Date: 5/28/2012 2:36:00 AM
Oh I LOVED this. I mean all of it. :D Red
Login to Reply
Date: 5/28/2012 1:26:00 AM
hahaah wow that's pretty good.. I enjoyed that xD haahha nice imagery... you've mastered that poem xD
Login to Reply
Date: 5/27/2012 8:39:00 AM
Now that I've taken a cold shower I must say you two are a pair made in heaven. More more. love, Kathy
Login to Reply
Date: 5/26/2012 11:07:00 PM
Great collaboration in tune with a flow and beauty on the theme. Thanks for your comment on my new Poem. Love and best wishes...Ravindra
Login to Reply
Date: 5/25/2012 6:00:00 PM
A great piece, thank you for sharing it with us. Well done to the both of you!
Login to Reply
Date: 5/23/2012 10:52:00 AM
Elliott & Vienna that is what we call great cooperation !!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
Login to Reply
Date: 5/23/2012 8:02:00 AM
a poetic delicacy made by two talented wordsmiths.. much enjoyed, elliott!..:) hugs!
Login to Reply
Date: 5/23/2012 12:53:00 AM
lovely, great read :-) by the way deathland part two is now ready please tell me what you think didnt know how to drop you a message..thanks have a nice day..Sam
Login to Reply
Date: 5/21/2012 8:58:00 PM
"I liked it, Elliott- very flowery words."
Login to Reply
Date: 5/21/2012 8:57:00 PM
great imagery and I loved the rhyming you mixed into it!! Schweet!!
Login to Reply
Date: 5/21/2012 8:38:00 PM
very well penned.
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things