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Sweet Music

He sits Softly Humming And seems to have no cares, Playing peacefully with his toys For hours. He sings Words that seem to stem from his heart. Words that have no meaning, Yet sweet they be; To me. Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 2011

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Date: 10/25/2014 4:19:00 PM
Then he is...a poet for how else could "... stem from his heart?" Delightful dear, Brenda! Enjoy the melody of his words for no better words you will find!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/25/2014 6:06:00 PM
No poet but he is a singer.
Date: 10/25/2014 2:55:00 PM
ahhh, this is so sweet. So you are a young mother??
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/25/2014 6:07:00 PM
In my heart I am anyway.
Date: 10/24/2014 10:18:00 PM
This is so touching and so adorable.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/25/2014 9:14:00 AM
Thank you Maurice.
Date: 10/24/2014 6:51:00 PM
Brenda, I really love your Mirror Cinquain poem. It captures the innocence and peace of a happy little one - reminds me of the days when my grand-babies were small...miss those days. The youngest of five is 15 now...Sandra
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/24/2014 6:56:00 PM
Some of our greatest moments. Thanks Sandra.
Date: 10/24/2014 6:37:00 PM
I can picture him sat there Brenda a lovely write hugs
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/24/2014 6:54:00 PM
Thanks Shadow.
Date: 10/24/2014 1:33:00 PM
Ahh!! Cute one..Enjoyed reading it today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/24/2014 2:41:00 PM
Thank you Sara.
Date: 10/24/2014 12:15:00 PM
Hi Brenda! Very nice penned in this pretty form. enjoyed the sweet musical read. :) have a lovely and safe weekend my dear friend! Take care ! xxxooxxx D.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/24/2014 12:49:00 PM
Thanks Dorian and I wish you a great weekend as well.
Date: 10/24/2014 10:14:00 AM
wow Brenda what a clever form - I LOVE it:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/24/2014 12:47:00 PM
Thank Jan. I hope you are feeling better now.
Date: 10/24/2014 9:16:00 AM
I read your words and I see my boys growing up fascinated with what they are doing and thinking when they were in play and thinking how much I loved them so. I still think of them at the age that they are and gone with their own families. Truly enjoyed Brenda :) eve
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/24/2014 12:47:00 PM
I could see my sons sitting at their play table so peaceful quietly playing and singing songs. Wonderful memories.