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Sweet Mistake

I was there Extant at the screen of life as the third parties A warmth which subsequently appeared capricious A love that never thought to be seek At once all disclosed by the warmth which began by a kiss ... One Eve is waiting overseas Stood upon her ignorance ... Ahead of them .... A falsity was presented as a host for our mistakes ... And the conversation went on, as usual ... Realism provoked to speak about the story which should not be exist... But I.... I mazed in clue, the clue to quench the truth Conversations legible through our eyes We forbid to speak, we crawled through the sense We seek through our heart , for the true heart we understood Because this should not be subsist.... I surrender to the possibilities Fling all of my feelings I cast my self out from your world, your love, even it's true or not With hope you would find the right love, true love, true end ~ And now you do ~ :) Author's note: Written on November 4, 2007

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/25/2012 11:21:00 PM
This such a beautiful piece... "Conversations legible through our eyes"... That line is electric! As is the rest of this poem. Excellent job, fantastic work. It really is beautiful.
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Date: 12/8/2012 6:49:00 AM
To undetstand the true heart..how besutifully penned that is.
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Date: 12/6/2012 8:58:00 PM
this seems very heartfelt from you. I just love that final stanza, Yanny!
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Date: 12/6/2012 6:41:00 PM
:-)...pd
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Date: 12/6/2012 1:39:00 PM
As always, I am moved by your sweet and magical verses. "I cast myself out from your world." what a great line. I cast myself into your world of imagination and I am refreshed to the core.
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