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Sweet Love of Mine

Her smile was like the sunshine Warming this heart of mine Her eyes still have me mesmerized Her favorite song I idolized And when the memories fall like rain My guitar thunders a sad refrain My heart felt safe within her space Now it feels so out of place... She used to be a sweet love of mine For her my heart will always pine ---- 7/31/17 Song: Sweet Child O' Mine

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Date: 12/8/2017 11:11:00 PM
Heartfelt emotional piece with such beautiful poetic flow! Best wishes and congrats!
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Date: 9/4/2017 11:51:00 AM
Lovely! Beautifully written!
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Date: 9/4/2017 8:49:00 AM
I liked the rhyme and flow to this one Joseph.. well written and congratulations on your placement..
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Date: 9/4/2017 1:53:00 PM
Thank you for my placement Silent One
Date: 8/3/2017 4:14:00 AM
This is so touching and beautiful Joseph. : )
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Date: 8/2/2017 5:28:00 AM
Very emotive write my friend...great comparison...^WW^
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Date: 8/1/2017 9:40:00 AM
So sweetly sad, Joseph, excellent writing:)
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Date: 8/1/2017 1:32:00 AM
I love this poem of yours Joseph. Is it for a contest? ....Maria
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Date: 7/31/2017 10:48:00 PM
I love the words that you have created for the song they it flows and rhymes so well. luck in the contest ~*
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Date: 7/31/2017 5:56:00 PM
Oh, I love this, Joseph, and I love that song you chose!!
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Date: 7/31/2017 5:23:00 PM
Hi Joseph, I found this write to be sad yet beautiful. Well done-Alexis
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Date: 7/31/2017 1:44:00 PM
- Heartbreaking beautiful, Joseph - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/31/2017 8:21:00 AM
Guns and roses! This is excellent, Joseph!
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