Joseph May Poet Rhyme

Sweet Love of Mine

Her smile was like the sunshine
 Warming this heart of mine
 Her eyes still have me mesmerized 
 Her favorite  song  I idolized
And when the memories fall like rain
 My guitar thunders a sad refrain
 My heart felt safe within her space
 Now it feels so out of place...
 She used to be a sweet love of mine
 For her my heart will always pine
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 7/31/17
 Song: Sweet Child O' Mine

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Melissa Tracy December 8, 2017 at 11:11 PM Heartfelt emotional piece with such beautiful poetic flow! Best wishes and congrats!

Mansi Sharma September 4, 2017 at 11:51 AM Lovely! Beautifully written!

Silent One September 4, 2017 at 8:49 AM I liked the rhyme and flow to this one Joseph.. well written and congratulations on your placement.. Joseph May September 4, 2017 at 1:53 PM Thank you for my placement Silent One

Connie Marcum Wong August 3, 2017 at 4:14 AM This is so touching and beautiful Joseph. : )

Winged Warrior August 2, 2017 at 5:28 AM Very emotive write my friend...great comparison...^WW^

Joanna Daniel August 1, 2017 at 9:40 AM So sweetly sad, Joseph, excellent writing:)

Maria Williams August 1, 2017 at 1:32 AM I love this poem of yours Joseph. Is it for a contest? ....Maria

Eve Roper July 31, 2017 at 10:48 PM I love the words that you have created for the song they it flows and rhymes so well. luck in the contest ~*

Andrea Dietrich July 31, 2017 at 5:56 PM Oh, I love this, Joseph, and I love that song you chose!!

Alexis Y. July 31, 2017 at 5:23 PM Hi Joseph, I found this write to be sad yet beautiful. Well done-Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen July 31, 2017 at 1:44 PM - Heartbreaking beautiful, Joseph - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

White Wolf July 31, 2017 at 8:21 AM Guns and roses! This is excellent, Joseph!