Janice Herzog Poet ABC

Sweet Love Nectar

I'm feeling like a caged wildcat,
Because I'm not where you're at
Being alone just isn't for me,
I long to feel you lustfully
Gentle at first, then hot and passionate
Is where I aim to eventually get
I want to surround you everywhere,
With my sweet love nectar
Brought about only by love and you,
And your full manliness too
Given to one another in true love only,
You'll make me feel more womanly
I crave the burning hot ecstasy,
That can be shared between you and me

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Raul Moreno February 17, 2009 at 1:57 PM Nice poem Janice, the form would fall under couplet. I like it though, It's a 10 but all I can rate is a 7...Raul

John Rhinem February 17, 2009 at 1:37 PM Well, its "The Love & Romance Queen!!!" Smile~"Hello Gifted & Lovely Janice Herzog!!!"~Another one of Your passion filled and wonderfully composed writes here dear lady!!! You have soo much love inside of your beautiful self~ and it just pours splendidly upon the pages when you write dear!!! And it 'Always' paints yourself within such a mesmerizing light!!!~"Extremely Passionate Write Beautiful Janice!!!~"My Love Always To You & All You Love, Forever, John!!!":)

Judy Riley February 17, 2009 at 12:49 PM I am not seeing the ABC form to this poem, I could be wrong so I gave half points, but if you read in the forms of poetry you may see what I mean, if not please correct me. Nice imagery and flow, lot of possibilities. Thanks for sharing. Judy Riley