Sweet Love

ah yes sweet love we do so miss, interlude a stolen kiss, had such a girl, her name was Chris, but she went away:( with wife stealing cuzzin Wayne:) Don

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/31/2012 3:48:00 PM

Sorry to hear of the untrustworthy cousin and wife..That would put a damper on ones ability to trust in women and cousins..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara

Don Johnson
Date: 1/31/2012 4:05:00 PM

its ok i moved along and met a few ladies in the time since she went away:)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/31/2012 10:10:00 AM

reeling with the sweet nostalgia brimming on this page, don!... i likey; could be a sijo too!..:) huggs!

Don Johnson
Date: 1/31/2012 4:04:00 PM

yes but we not allowed to rhyme on the sijo cloud , ho hum:)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/31/2012 7:29:00 AM

It is exciting to see the replenishment of new poetry here everyday when I log on. I enjoy the diverse poetry so I am never bored by most of what I read. I am happy to have read your poetry this morning Don. I hope that you might be able to find the time to read some of the other poetry here also. Love, Carol

Shirley Long

Date: 1/30/2012 6:48:00 PM

Good poem, I enjoyce reading it.

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/30/2012 5:29:00 PM

Ha ha, very humorous Don! Too bad "...but she went away...", that does suck when it happens! Hey Don, are you going to write a Sijo for Tracie's "Sijo Kiss" contest? You would be great at writing one I know, might try it mate? Well Great Work my friend!! Keep 'em coming, Awesome Job!!

Don Johnson
Date: 1/30/2012 10:30:00 PM

you would be better than me in this type of contest mate...pretty sure without debate:)