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Premiere Contest WinnerSweet Little Lies


Sweet Little Lies


Those sugar-coated little sweet white lies,
could be at times, a chore that we despise.
To keep the peace, sometimes they are a prize
depending on how well the task applies.

With one you love, it often can be wise,
if asked a question where you must advise
like, "do I look okay," most times implies
a "yes dear" answer even though your eyes

observe miss-match of shirt and tie; disguise
your answer with affirmative replies.
And when he gives you candy as surprise,
though on a diet, telling him...unwise.

Or he goes shopping with your list and buys
some extra sweets like ice cream, cookies, pies...
you smile and say, "we needed new supplies,"
instead of reprimanding with your sighs.

Although your lie, "oh thank you dear," belies
your thoughts, it turns off impulse to chastise.
These small deceits in name of love give rise
to staying bonded...using sweet white lies.


Sandra M. Haight

~1st Place~
Premiere Contest: Sweet Little Lies
Sponsor: Silent One
Judged: 07/08/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Milliner Avatar
July 11, 2016 at 3:51 PM
Great write!! Congratulations on your 1st place win!!
Haight Avatar
July 11, 2016 at 9:18 PM
Thank you so much, Sarita. I appreciate your visit and congratulations! Hugs, Sandra
Devnath  Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 1:32 PM
Sweet white lies mixed with sweet. Beautifully done my lovely smiling friend. Congrats on your superb win. A beautiful 7. Loved always, bl
Haight Avatar
July 11, 2016 at 9:17 PM
Thank you very much, BL, for your lovely comments, congrats and welcomed 7! I always appreciate your nice visits and supportive remarks. Sandra
Lamoureux Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 8:17 AM
Congratulations on your top spot!
Haight Avatar
July 11, 2016 at 9:16 PM
Thank you very much, Richard. Sandra
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 11:19 PM
Well done! This is fantastic! :)
Haight Avatar
July 11, 2016 at 9:16 PM
Thank you once again, Sunita, for your supportive comments. Hugs, Sandra
Smith Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 8:00 PM
Great work Sandra, congratulations ...
Haight Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 8:05 PM
Thank you very much, Charlie. Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 6:27 PM
WAY to GO Sandra. Cograts on the amazing win.n
Haight Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 8:06 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea. Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 4:56 PM
Sandra, congrats on your TOP win in the contest! it is very well deserved and I love monorhyme poems! Be blessed :)-luloo
Haight Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 8:06 PM
Thank you so much, Luloo! Hugs, Sandra
Medders Tobechi Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 2:59 PM
Congratulations, Sandra. It seems as though you know the ins and outs of a relationship pretty we. Nicely penned poem.
Haight Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 8:08 PM
Thank you so much, Janis. Yes...a long relationship...married 58 years last month! Lots of ins and outs!! Hugs, Sandra
Ward Avatar
June 26, 2016 at 11:53 AM
A good take on the theme! 7. Julia
Haight Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 9:38 PM
Thank you very much, Julia, for your nice visit, supportive comment and the 7! Sandra
Cheema Avatar
June 26, 2016 at 8:38 AM
I think we all gloat on theses sweet little lies. So beautifully presented, Sandra!
Haight Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 9:39 PM
Thank you, Balveen. Yes...they are sometimes necessary! Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 8:34 PM
Well written a subject I am use to hearing. Good luck in the contest :-)Thank you for reading my poem little people. Hugs Eve
Haight Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 9:40 PM
Thank you so much, Eve. Hugs, Sandra
Rycroft Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 12:11 PM
A very good poem, a brilliant write well written xxxx
Haight Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 5:29 PM
Thank you very much, Wendy! Hugs, Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 10:01 AM
Love the idea of all this and the message of it. I believe in this, Sandra!!
Haight Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 5:29 PM
Thanks, Andrea. We can all identify with this message! I like your new Avatar! Hugs, Sandra
Turner Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 8:48 AM
I love the sensitivity of this poem, Mrs Sandra. We have all done these things. I've often wondered why wives ask their husbands questions they already know the answer to. Do I look okay, after she has just spent an hour looking in the mirror or does this dress make me look fat. Baiting, to hear what they want to hear. Very few husbands will be as honest as the mirror.
Haight Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 5:28 PM
Thanks, Daniel...we all want positive affirmation, I guess the 'baiting' is a human nature thing to make sure we get it? Thanks for the nice comment. Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 9:26 PM
Sandra, no lie, this is sweet!
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