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Sweet Kiss

I watch as you speak and how your mouth moves. Words spoken fall upon deaf ears. Sounds muted by the subtle nuances of motion which propel unheard words in my direction. Full ripe colors each reflecting diffrent moods, feelings. I have yet to deciper them all. But even in natural tone they spin images of long embraces in my mind. A hundred times over I resist tracing those lines of expression. A hundred times I've ached at the feel of their touch. But not to be for it is forbidden. Oh so tempting to surrender to sealed eyes and a mouth guided by an imagined path taken in my minds eyes a dozen times over. A path to a promise land that I can only dream. Sweet warmth, sweet softness, sweet kiss..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/4/2017 9:00:00 PM
Sabastin looked you up tonight , Where are you posting now. Sure hope your still writing. all the best Anne
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Date: 6/14/2016 6:35:00 PM
sabastin, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. **SKAT**
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Date: 4/27/2013 2:13:00 AM
Great write!
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Date: 6/1/2012 12:54:00 AM
Sabastin, this is a sweet poem - warm and lovely words. - Pace & Love - Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/14/2012 1:26:00 PM
Oh how I wish I could give you 100 for this one, you captured it all in the last line .Plus held me captive while reading it .Wonderful !! Anne
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Date: 10/28/2011 7:47:00 AM
This is lovely poetry and the feelings and thoughts are heartfelt, the diction is superbly done. I could feel your longing and desires through each line of your verse. Beautifully done! Thank you for sharing.
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Sabastin Gunner
Date: 10/30/2011 5:50:00 AM
thank you very much for your kind words
Date: 10/27/2011 5:56:00 AM
Very nice. Great expression of mixed feelings. A opening of the heart. Keep writing.
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