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Sweet Jake

I knew a guy whose name was Jake Who lived in the woods near a lake He was sorta wacky And a tad bit tacky But for some reason he liked to bake Alexis Y. 9-8-17

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Date: 9/9/2017 2:10:00 PM
Sweet poem! :)
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Date: 9/8/2017 9:02:00 PM
gosh, Alexis. you used to play in the water turned on by hydrants? That must have been so cool! Let me read your poem here now. I am drawn to it, as it was the nicname of my stepfather.
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Date: 9/8/2017 9:02:00 PM
ha. It was cute. And was a bit like OUR Jake except for the last line!! (he loved the woods and was kinda wacky. haha)
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Date: 9/8/2017 1:25:00 PM
Another shake-n-jake poem, eh. Humorous limerick, not acrostic ... I'm just saying. Funny write, lady. Love and hugs.
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Date: 9/8/2017 12:01:00 PM
- A sweet guy, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/8/2017 10:30:00 AM
That is such a cute little poem it gave me a chuckle this morning thank you for that.
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Date: 9/8/2017 9:32:00 AM
his cookies were oh so very sweet...couldn't wait til it was time to eat...really crispy crunch...in every bite I'd munch...until I heard he'd mix with his feet
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