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Bitesize Contest No104 Poetry Contest

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She sailed in beauty late at night, Over the seas, together, ready for a flight. He kissed her hard, oh luscious lips. She knew not she had launched a thousand ships.

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Date: 3/19/2025 8:07:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your verse, my friend.
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Date: 3/18/2025 10:06:00 PM
Helen with her enticing beauty has been the cause of the downfall of empires.....a face that launched a thousand ships ! It's said that her beauty sparked the Trojan war. Great poem on a classical heroine. All the Best dear Victor.
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Date: 3/18/2025 2:56:00 PM
A stellar poem, Victor! Best wishes for the contest. :)
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Date: 3/18/2025 2:07:00 PM
Old stuff gracefully redesigned in your luscious poem. I like it.
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Date: 3/18/2025 11:46:00 AM
Love your poem Victor good luck in the contest.
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Date: 3/18/2025 8:39:00 AM
Love it, Victor! Well done. Troy was never the same.
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Date: 3/18/2025 7:18:00 AM
Quite a sensual one from your pen Victor... Best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 3/18/2025 7:06:00 AM
- Sweet poem, Victor :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 3/18/2025 6:25:00 AM
Short, sweet, ultra romantic. Hope you're feeling better
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Date: 3/18/2025 6:15:00 AM
we never know people, a story to be remembered, well crafted poetry thanks poet
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Date: 3/18/2025 4:03:00 AM
A beautiful poem dearest Victor. Enlighten me, did he kiss her hard because that was his intention of launching a thousand ships? One to ponder....Hugs
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Date: 3/18/2025 3:32:00 AM
Your are so the romantic that tells a beautiful tale every time, Your poetry never goes past me Victor, have a blessed day. The kind where you are followed by angels wherever you go xo
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Date: 3/18/2025 1:00:00 AM
A lovely tribute to Helen unaware of the impact she had on others. Tom
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Date: 3/18/2025 12:15:00 AM
Loved the ending Victor splendid poetry my friend what a lovely woman...
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