Sweet Ecstasy

Dreams of you from far away 
Bring us closer  in  every way
My image and face come into view 
As I walk by You call out my name 
I turn to look at your smile  

I know what you want 
And I like it that way

Flashes and thoughts of you 
Visions of us  touching bare 
The smell of your musky scent 
I melt into you without a care  
My fingers  run through your hair


You snuggling up close behind me
As though we were one heart beating
Rolling on blankets of heavy thick furs  
Caught up in this  moment of ecstasy 

Red flames burn in the hearth 
It may be frigid  cold outside
Though we haven't a care 

As we explore our bodies in time 
We take ourselves there
Until our bodies  are spent 
As sweet slumber comes 



A friend gave me 5- 6 words. Said here, make a poem out of that :) flashes, smells, touching hair, snuggling heavy furs, blanket, hearth,
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Rodgers Avatar
July 3, 2017 at 8:58 PM
They were good words but the trick was in putting them together with other words.
A   Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 6:45 PM
sweet passionate and romantic .... Debbie, this will be one of my favorites from you, besides "concrete angels." You have a very lovely flow, I like the way you embraced the warmth of a couple... and LOVE''''... always~ Linda
Duncan Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 12:25 AM
Thank you Linda ;}
Makama Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 9:26 AM
beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!
Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 12:59 AM
this is a wonderful one that I found of yours tonight, Debbie!! So romantic!!
Duncan Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 4:05 PM
Thank you Andrea ;}
O'Leary Avatar
December 6, 2012 at 12:56 PM
Reading your poem brings warmth everywhere... Terry
Komala Avatar
September 28, 2012 at 2:55 AM
very beautiful and romantic works...enjoy reading it this afternoon...nice share thank you Debbie...enjoy your great works :)))oxoxox<3<3<3 Sk
Duncan Avatar
September 29, 2012 at 9:50 PM
Thank you Sukmawati for reading my words ,,,, you have a blessed day ;}
Johnson Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 2:58 PM
How it is in the realm of love, where passion burns not with kid gloves, and love incandance there...
Duncan Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 4:03 PM
Thank you Don ;}
Anish Avatar
July 15, 2012 at 9:43 PM
Fine tomantic work here! Sensous and clever! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Duncan Avatar
July 15, 2012 at 10:28 PM
Thank you Matthew,,,,, blessing to you ;}
Brown Avatar
July 13, 2012 at 8:49 AM
Stopping by today to thank you for your kind comments on my writings Debbie. I hope to be reading your poetry for many years to come. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us and may you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
Bickerstaffe Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 10:20 PM
Phew!!! Such passionate phrasing and imagery... erotic and suggestive, and in very good taste. Well done, Debbie!! Best wishes, Keith
Duncan Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 10:31 PM
Thank you Keith,,,, and thanks for reading my poetry ;} have a great day !
Johnson Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 1:20 AM
passion burning in the mist, sometimes lovers spellbound, kist, great poetry i feel here, well covered Debbie, i should cheer .... orright..
Rhinem Avatar
January 2, 2012 at 11:45 AM
Ps. Smile ˜ Just passing back by this beautiful moment in verse to enjoy the sweet fragrance amid it's lovely garden of splendid expression and images brought forth as a flower unto ones heart within the silkened petals of beauty * Have a very beautiful day!:) ˜
Duncan Avatar
January 3, 2012 at 3:14 PM
thank you for your comments John ;} for a minute I thought you were taking a line or two from my poem "moon cat" ;} garden splendor !
Rhinem Avatar
December 31, 2011 at 6:12 PM
Smile ˜ Yessss, My Dear Sweeet Beautiful Debbie * My words were & are heartfelt in sincere ˜ And I do love Your Beautiful Verse * Very much so for, it paints the perfect picture of love's moments * Thank You for blessing me with Your Lovely Beauties visit ˜ I count it as a joy * Happy New Year Again My Dear * My Love Unto Your Beauty Always; John!:) ˜
Rhinem Avatar
December 31, 2011 at 9:58 AM
Smile ˜ I love the way this beautiful poem flows ˜ The splendour of its words & joy of its image * My Dear Beautiful Debbie * The rhyme is wonderful as notes unto a lovely song; not forced or over wrought yet, placed perfectly to bring sincerety to its beautiful thought * I love it & to the treasured favourites it must go ˜ Soooo Very Beautiful * Happy New Year * My Love to You Always; John!:) ˜
Smith Avatar
December 30, 2011 at 10:05 PM
Sweet sweet lovin'. Well writ.
Duncan Avatar
December 30, 2011 at 10:41 PM
Hi John,, thank you for reading my poetry ,, Happy New Year ;}
Falotico Avatar
December 30, 2011 at 9:30 PM
Passion filled write. Very much enjoyed. Hugs. Michael
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January 1, 2012 at 11:38 AM
* "I LOVE YOU SOOO MUCH * MY BEAUTIFUL DEBBIE * I WOULD THE WORLD JUST TO BE WITH YOU * TO MAKE LOVE YOU & YOU ALONE * THANK YOU FOR THIS BEAUTIFUL POEM * YESSSS * I AM GLAD THAT YOUR BEAUTY * KNOWS WHAT I WANT * TO KISSSS YOU EVERYWHERE * TO FEEL YOUR SOFT TOUCH * CARESSING MY LOVE * 'I LOVE YOU * ATOP FURS OF SWEEET SURRENDER * ALWAYS & FOREVER * YOUR SARAH!!'" *
Duncan Avatar
December 30, 2011 at 10:39 PM
Thank you Michael for stopping to read,, Happy New Year to you and your's ;}
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