Sara Ella Poet Rhyme

Sweet Dreams In C - Collaboration With Darren White

black and white tones
ring together echoes
over two tone photos
scrolling along

memories
colored in remembrance
happenings in sepia
when we were small

imagination animated
claude leading the way
moonlight illuminates
a kaleidescope display

moon shines its silvery
rays, soft music plays
around the room
I will sleep soon

key notes weave harmonies
whipperwill and chickadees
night's sweet lullaby song
gently sings of rest and sleep

last notes fade away
musical dreams in C
eat away sharp edges 
I smile in my sleep

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Patricia Cresswell October 13, 2017 at 10:50 AM At my grandparents cottage up north and all the night music begins. For a child it is a part of their magical world. Your collaboration returned me that time so exquisitely. Thank you. Sara Ella October 14, 2017 at 9:58 PM Thank you Patricia :)

White Wolf July 31, 2017 at 10:36 AM This reminded me of years ago when I awoke to a whole symphony of sounds going on in my head! I love this SO much, you guys! Great collab Sara Ella August 1, 2017 at 5:52 PM Thank you Rick :) It was fun to collaborate with Darren - his writing is so good! Music is, to me, a wonderful way to express ourselves. You, my friend, have so much music in you <3 Glad that you share it with us.

Lisa Ricci July 11, 2017 at 12:13 PM Hello Sara. I hope this day finds you well. This entry is beautiful. Sweet Dreams indeed. I love the title by the way. This co-write is very smooth and it flowed as one. Thank you for sharing your talent. May all dreams be sweet and when awake as well. Have a wonderful afternoon. Well done entirely. PS: Hello Darren Sara Ella July 11, 2017 at 2:20 PM Hello Lisa, I really appreciate your wonderful comments - thank you so much! <3 :)

Darren White July 11, 2017 at 1:58 AM I loved this poem Sara, was great working with you :) Sweet, soft and lovely! Sara Ella July 11, 2017 at 7:24 AM Yes! :) This was fun and thank you! <3

Joseph May July 10, 2017 at 12:07 PM How sweet the musical dreams in C, in tones of ebony and ivory...A lovely Collaboration you two Sara Ella July 10, 2017 at 1:00 PM Thank you Joseph :) This was so much fun to do!

Daniel Turner July 10, 2017 at 8:15 AM I almost always listen to music when I go to bed. What a peaceful way to go to sleep. Wonderful collaboration, Sara and Darren:) Sara Ella July 10, 2017 at 12:58 PM Thank you Daniel :) It was inspired by the music of Debussy <3

Chris Green July 10, 2017 at 6:56 AM Wow, this was fantastic . I love everything about this. It has a melodic feel to it and brings a song to life within the lines. This was great you two. Sara Ella July 10, 2017 at 12:57 PM Thank you so much Chris :) The music is key! It is the coolest feeling to be able to create poems with such talented poets. <3 This collaboration with Darren was so much fun too! :D

Heidi Sands July 9, 2017 at 5:21 PM Very nice collaboration! I enjoyed this. Great ending too :) Sara Ella July 9, 2017 at 6:02 PM Thank you Heidi :) Glad you liked it! <3

Tim Smith July 9, 2017 at 3:59 PM So beautiful you two...a favorite Sara Ella July 9, 2017 at 4:07 PM Thank you Tim <3 It was fun to create and thank you so much for the fave :D