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- Sweet Dreams - Nursery Rhyme 2 -

It's night my little teddy bear
                       the moonlight shines, no fear
                       you are our treasure so dear

                       It's night my little teddy bear
                       a lullaby in a rocking chair
                       always with due care

                       It's night my little teddy bear
                       the voice from angels would cheer
                       When you close your eyes, you will hear it clear

                       It's night my little teddy bear
                       let your dreams fly in the air
                       in search of the cute hare
                      
                       It's night my little teddy bear
                       star sprinkle so crystal clear
                       your mom will always be here






                       14/03/2021
                       Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
                       Copyright © All Rights Reserved

                       Nursery Rhyme 2 Poetry Contest
                       Sponsored by: Eve Roper
                       1st place in the contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 3/23/2021 10:59:00 AM
Wow this is so sweet... Loved it... Congrats dear Anne... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/23/2021 11:16:00 AM
- Thank you very much Ani, for your comments and congratulation :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/22/2021 12:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win. She earned it!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/23/2021 11:15:00 AM
- Caren, thank you very much for your comments and congratulation :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/21/2021 3:15:00 PM
Dropping back with many congrats Anne-Lise:-) -) hugs Jan xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/23/2021 11:15:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your comments and congratulation, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/20/2021 8:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Anne-Lise, in my Nursery Rhyme2 contest. A great verse for little children to remember and learn. I like the repetitive lines. Please visit my blog on the contest. Nursery Rhyme 2 Contest. - Eve Roper's Blog (poetrysoup.com) Hugs Eve
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/21/2021 3:23:00 AM
- Many thanks for my place on your winning list ... I'm waiting for Nursery Rhyme contest number 3 :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/20/2021 6:20:00 PM
revisiting to congratulate you. Well-deserved! Love ~ Mala
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/21/2021 3:20:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your congratulations, Mala :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/20/2021 4:52:00 PM
Your rhyme is a peaceful, soothing lullaby, that children would enjoy hearing again and again, to pave the way to sweet dreams. Congratulations on this awesome winning entry, Anne-Lise. hugs, Evelyn
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/21/2021 3:20:00 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comments and congratulations, Evelyn :)- hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/20/2021 12:00:00 PM
Beautiful, tender and very sweet, Anne-Lise! Love the repetition of the first phrase. Perfect for a nursery rhyme. And, a lovely picture of protection and comfort through inclusion of "mother" at the end. Congratulations and hugs!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/20/2021 2:17:00 PM
- Sam, thank you very much for your lovely comments and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/20/2021 11:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. "Sooooo Cute" Love the story and cute picture. I am a bear person. Have a blessed day/weekend..................
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/20/2021 2:17:00 PM
- Thank you very much for your comments and congratulations, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/18/2021 7:39:00 AM
Incredibly lovely nursery rhyme, Anne-Lise! Look forward to reading more of cute poems. Hugs~ Mala
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/18/2021 8:16:00 AM
- Glad you liked it Mala, many thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/17/2021 1:16:00 PM
That would be so cute for a children's book. Nicely written. love phyl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/17/2021 1:32:00 PM
- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/15/2021 1:06:00 PM
this is really lovely
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/17/2021 7:49:00 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Jack :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/15/2021 11:39:00 AM
Eve should like this one because I like it. Good luck in the contest.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/21/2021 3:17:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your comments, Robert :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/15/2021 11:37:00 AM
So very sweet and a wonderful piece for a children's book. Wouldn't it be great if The Soup got together and published a book of rhymes for children. God Bless, JB
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/21/2021 3:18:00 AM
- A good idea ... I like it, Judy :) - Many thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/15/2021 10:41:00 AM
This is so sweet! I love it. Very nice :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/15/2021 1:11:00 PM
- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/15/2021 7:19:00 AM
WoW! Anne-Lise, You've such an adorable and charming “ nursery rhyme” poem. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/17/2021 1:32:00 PM
- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/14/2021 10:59:00 PM
Yes indeed this would make a lovely lullaby. Love it Ann-Lise.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/15/2021 1:11:00 PM
- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/14/2021 4:59:00 PM
you took the challenge and did it very very well with this charming lullabye, sweetie.
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Date: 3/14/2021 3:46:00 PM
Ahh!!! Such a kind little nursery rhyme. Reads like a good contender to me. Eve will have a hard job deciding which ones to place because I have read so many good ones. Thanks for your visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 3/14/2021 2:34:00 PM
What a sweet nursery rhyme, Sunshine! I have a stuffed polar bear on my bed and he's been with me for about 20 years. It's just nice having something to cuddle. Hope your entry is a big winner in Eve's contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 3/14/2021 11:35:00 AM
Hello Sunshine Smile, i love this lullaby. Hugs Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/15/2021 10:10:00 AM
Hello Sunshine Smile, You ar4e welcome my friend. Enjoy your day . Hugs Darlene.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/14/2021 1:06:00 PM
- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/14/2021 8:01:00 AM
Soothing, comforting song of care and love--well done, Anne-Lise.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/14/2021 1:05:00 PM
- Vijay, many thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/14/2021 7:26:00 AM
aww what a tender write a lovely lullaby Anne Line:-) hugs Jan xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/14/2021 1:04:00 PM
- Glad you liked it Jan, many thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/14/2021 6:49:00 AM
A lovely nursery rhyme Anne, perfect for getting the young ones off to sleep. Best of luck in the contest. Tom
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/14/2021 1:03:00 PM
- Many thanks for lovely comments and wishes, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/14/2021 6:38:00 AM
I loved your nursery rhyme, a lullaby to get children to sleep.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/14/2021 1:02:00 PM
- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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