Joseph May Poet Quintain (English)

Sweet Desire

She had a craving for something sweet
    So she got herself a sugar daddy
      He gave her all her desired treats
         And put them in a caddie
 She was his favorite candy

     He called her his Sweetie
         And  bought her diamonds and pearls
  They vacationed in Tahiti
      Where turqouise waves would swirl
 And she would rock his world
                            ~~

 Contest : Sweet Or Salty
Sponsor : Andrea Dietrich

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Skat A November 7, 2013 at 12:01 PM Joseph, *nice* SWEET Or SALTY win................... HUGS ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A November 6, 2013 at 7:28 PM Joseph, Congratulations On your way to xool Sweet & Sour win... always~ Linda aka PD

Donna Jones November 6, 2013 at 9:37 AM Nice different take on the contest..congratulations Joseph

Sara Kendrick November 6, 2013 at 9:02 AM Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara

Andrea Dietrich November 5, 2013 at 8:10 AM Cute limericks, Joseph. Congrats in my contest. Joseph May November 5, 2013 at 12:07 PM thank you for my placement Andrea

Debbie Guzzi October 9, 2013 at 3:32 PM Very tongue in cheek verse! [Hi Joseph! The Ghazal can have up to 15 couplets I believe.] Light & Love Joseph May October 9, 2013 at 6:43 PM Thank you Debbie....I might attempt one....

Anne-Lise Andresen October 8, 2013 at 12:15 PM ..... and lived happily in luxury the rest of their lives :) - Fun to read, Joseph! - Well done! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Joseph May October 8, 2013 at 6:30 PM thank you Anne....hugs