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Sweet desire

She had a craving for something sweet So she got herself a sugar daddy He gave her all her desired treats And put them in a caddie She was his favorite candy He called her his Sweetie And bought her diamonds and pearls They vacationed in Tahiti Where turqouise waves would swirl And she would rock his world ~~ Contest : Sweet Or Salty Sponsor : Andrea Dietrich

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/7/2013 12:01:00 PM
Joseph, *nice* SWEET Or SALTY win................... HUGS ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/6/2013 7:28:00 PM
Joseph, Congratulations On your way to xool Sweet & Sour win... always~ Linda aka PD
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Date: 11/6/2013 9:37:00 AM
Nice different take on the contest..congratulations Joseph
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Date: 11/6/2013 9:02:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara
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Date: 11/5/2013 8:10:00 AM
Cute limericks, Joseph. Congrats in my contest.
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Joseph May
Date: 11/5/2013 12:07:00 PM
thank you for my placement Andrea
Date: 10/9/2013 3:32:00 PM
Very tongue in cheek verse! [Hi Joseph! The Ghazal can have up to 15 couplets I believe.] Light & Love
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Joseph May
Date: 10/9/2013 6:43:00 PM
Thank you Debbie....I might attempt one....
Date: 10/8/2013 12:15:00 PM
..... and lived happily in luxury the rest of their lives :) - Fun to read, Joseph! - Well done! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Joseph May
Date: 10/8/2013 6:30:00 PM
thank you Anne....hugs