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Sweet Darling

Sweet Darling, all I think about is you. When I’m alone, I daydream and I pine. To be your Valentine, what must I do? You’ve caught me gazing at your eyes of blue, your locks of golden hair, and smile so fine. Sweet darling, all I think about is you. We’re friends, but don’t you have by now a clue that I adore you? (that’s not just a line!) To be your Valentine, what must I do? You need to know my love for you is true. Were I the sun, for you alone I’d shine. Sweet Darling, all I think about is you. I want you, and I think you want me too. Yet nothing happens! Please give me a sign. To be your Valentine, what must I do? Just make your move, and see what can ensue. I guarantee that it will be divine. Sweet Darling, all I think about is you. To be your Valentine, what must I do? Written Feb. 1, 2016 for the Valentine's Villanelle Challenge of Dave Will

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/22/2016 11:24:00 AM
Sweet villanelle, Andrea.... :-)
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Date: 2/27/2016 10:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place Andrea! Well done, Brava!
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Date: 2/25/2016 11:09:00 AM
Congrats Andrea on the top most slot! Well deserved and lovely!
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Date: 2/25/2016 9:59:00 AM
Valentine Villanelles almost sweet as apple jelly now read on winners’ page..You are quite the sage..Sweet Congrats..Sara
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Date: 2/25/2016 7:54:00 AM
Hi Andrea. Congrats on your beautiful and romantic top placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 2/24/2016 10:18:00 PM
Such a sweet Valentine villanelle, Andrea! Congrats on your win...it's always good to read your poetry after a hiatus. Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 2/24/2016 5:54:00 PM
Guess what doe ball said he was giving you a seven and forgot to give it. Sorry about that, here we go....done.
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Date: 2/24/2016 5:52:00 PM
Beautiful Villanelle Andrea. Congratulations on your win in the contest. This piece has such a gentle flow and the words do sing, it had to be a winner. This is definitely a seven....Vlad.
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Date: 2/24/2016 11:17:00 AM
The reader can just feel the earnest plea and sincerity all thru this piece. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/23/2016 9:21:00 PM
Ah this is so lovely Andrea.. no wonder a top podium.. big congrats.
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Date: 2/23/2016 9:21:00 PM
Sweet Darling! This is wonderful. Enjoyed the honey drenched write. Love & hugs, Bobby
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Date: 2/23/2016 4:00:00 PM
This is wonderful Andrea, Congratulations on your "Valentine's Villanelle Challenge" have a nice day. ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/23/2016 10:28:00 AM
Congrats on a great win Andrea
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Date: 2/11/2016 8:18:00 AM
Beautiful love poem.
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Date: 2/10/2016 5:35:00 AM
I wish I could write like you! Good Valentine poem!
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Date: 2/9/2016 11:00:00 PM
Lovely!
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Date: 2/9/2016 1:21:00 PM
Beautiful poem beautifully worded for valentine's villanelle Challenge. Good luck my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
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Date: 2/8/2016 6:27:00 AM
Ah--chemistry. I played with a chemistry set when I was young, but it didn't bring me love. We know that pining (lust) is such a strong force in this universe. A sentiment not lost on Madison Avenue. You are very kind, and this poem is such a reflection on what so many people feel at one time or another.
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Date: 2/7/2016 8:42:00 PM
G'day Andrea ... romance shines; good luck Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 2/6/2016 8:33:00 AM
your words soften my heart like a damsel in need of a companion..... Your lines are sweeteners to a curious mind which is absolutely satisfied. There's this eagerness I have running to your pages and your reputation of meeting that expectation is beyond any form of appreciation or grading. Beyond 7 my friend!!
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Date: 2/5/2016 11:44:00 AM
Ah, I think this aptly expresses the heart of one who loves. Sweetly romantic, Andie...All the best in the contest. PS. I left a reply for you on my villanelle page. hugs!
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Date: 2/4/2016 1:55:00 PM
Hi Andrea. Wonderful love poem so excellently written. Love the villanelle form!
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Date: 2/4/2016 1:41:00 PM
Sweet holiday verse here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 2/4/2016 1:29:00 PM
this challenge brings out the romantic in you.. who would resist, andie... ohh so fine!.. huggs
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Date: 2/4/2016 8:22:00 AM
Nice verse, not at all needy. Best of luck in the contest.
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