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Sweet Caterpillar

Sweet caterpillar
Sitting on a leaf with joy
for soon it will fly


FOR CATERPILLAR'S GATE CONTEST
WON 6TH PLACE CONGRATS TO ME

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/1/2011 11:07:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry with us and for your kind comments on my writing Faleshia. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2010 9:46:00 PM

Hey, congratulations. How did I miss THIS one!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/30/2010 3:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Joyce

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/30/2010 9:24:00 AM

WeeeeeeeeeHawwwwwwwww !!!Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Faleshia. Love, Carol

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 4/30/2010 8:29:00 AM

Congrats on you win in the contest, Faleshia! Nice! Jimmy

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/29/2010 7:52:00 PM

Congrats on the win

Ray Dillard

Date: 4/29/2010 7:26:00 PM

A very good description of the picture. What a fun contest. Thanks to Raul for putting it together and congratulations on your win! RAY

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 4/29/2010 7:23:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS for your 6tgh place. Let's pop-up the CHAMPAGNE!!!

Date: 4/29/2010 7:15:00 PM

Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on your win in Raul's contest to my other comment. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you many more. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/29/2010 7:05:00 PM

Congrats Faleshia on your wonderful win in Raul's contest.. amazing words to describe the little creature and a special win to enjoy..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/29/2010 6:22:00 PM

Falishia, congratulations on your success in my Caterpillar's Gait contest...Raul

Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/29/2010 8:51:00 AM

No we see many butterflies around as it is getting warmer. Nicely penned Haiku and good luck in the contest. Thank you for your birthday wishes and your comments...Gert

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/29/2010 8:10:00 AM

Wish you the best of luck in the contest, Faleshia :) very nice haiku :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/28/2010 10:00:00 AM

an endearing write! Light & Love

James Fraser

Date: 4/27/2010 3:14:00 PM

Lovely Haiku Faleshia, thank you so much for all your comments. I wish you all the best in your writing endeavours >> James

Date: 4/27/2010 2:55:00 PM

That it will. I like the uplifing feel of this one. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/27/2010 11:58:00 AM

Very nice Faleshia and good luck with your excellent entry... mine is The Green Mile reference to the great movie of prison ..like the caterpillar is in prison and then free as a butterfly ... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/27/2010 10:26:00 AM

Great write that you have penned in this one..Good luck in the contest..Keep the creative pen flowing.Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara