Gary Smith Poet Couplet

Sweet Butterfly

Delicate as finest gossamer yet

She dances a lovely pirouette,

Riding sunbeams as she goes

Resplendent in her finest clothes,

A fluttering jewel before my eye

How beautiful you are, sweet butterfly.









Entry for
Writing Challenge, October - 
Butterfly- Poetry Contest
Sponsored by
Dear Heart- Wiishkobe Ode 
1/10/2019. Placed 3rd.

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Funom Makama October 15, 2019 at 11:03 AM A big big big big congratulations on your win my wonderful frirend... Lines so magnetic, words so beautiful, I am gradually becoming an extremist to your thoughts.. Great piece here. Gary Smith October 15, 2019 at 11:11 AM Thank you Funom. :)

Constance La France October 8, 2019 at 7:31 PM Gary congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful poem and I love your image too! Gary Smith October 9, 2019 at 5:53 AM Thank you Dear heart. :)

Jan Allison October 6, 2019 at 4:27 PM Beautifully written Gary, many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx Gary Smith October 6, 2019 at 4:30 PM Thank you Jan. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen October 6, 2019 at 11:47 AM - Lovely described, Gary ... congratulations on a great win in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Gary Smith October 6, 2019 at 11:47 AM Thank you Anne-Lise. :)

Joseph P. DiMino October 2, 2019 at 6:29 AM Very nicely done, Gary. Beautiful write! Gary Smith October 2, 2019 at 6:49 AM Thank you Joe. :)

P.S. Awtry October 1, 2019 at 9:53 PM Gary you are the butterfly poet! The cadence is liltingly butterfly-ish. :) Gary Smith October 2, 2019 at 4:45 AM Thank you P.S. :)

Line Gauthier October 1, 2019 at 9:40 AM Lovely, Gary. So sweet. Gary Smith October 1, 2019 at 9:40 AM Thank you Line. :)