Sweet Breeze

The sweet breeze through the window
asks nothing as unseen birds call.
It asks nothing of the sun
as it sweeps across yards,
yet it whispers to waking dreams.
My dreams ask,
Did I love too much?
behind my mind’s eye,
visions
and what do they mean
when we give of ourselves
so fully we are spent.
Now I’m alone.
Canadian geese gather
crowding a path along the river
as the day passes,
so consumed with each other
they ignore the mothers
and children who pass.
A ski jet slaps waves,
and the river breathes.
The gaggle whispers among itself,
and nature speaks a language of her own.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Challender Avatar
May 8, 2024 at 12:16 AM
Congratulations on your win Mike. Well written. Great title too!
Kendrick Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 5:30 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. We have Canada Geese who live here year-round now for some reason. Today I noticed that there were about 8 to 12 babies with the group waddling around. Sara K
Michael Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 7:55 AM
All in the breath of breeze...Lovely one. Congratulations on POTD.
Skelly Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 10:57 PM
Very nice indeed...
Buhagiar Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 10:23 PM
My congrats for POTD. Loved your poem.
Fenn Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 5:37 PM
Beautiful, clear scene! I can see it play out right before my eyes! Congrats on achieving POTD.
Nicole Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 5:12 PM
A *Sweet breeze* can create a tender moment, a beautiful mood. It can also leave the heart searching for more. Your thoughts caress softly around me. Congratulations Mike, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. ~ Brandy
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 3:03 PM
Congratulations on a beautiful poem! "nature speaks a language of her own" - very true. You have painted an engrossing picture of nature. BW ~ Mala
Radhakrishna Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 1:39 PM
Congrats on POTD and a very interesting and different poem! Really loved it!
Andresen Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 1:00 PM
- Congratulations on your lovely p.o.t.d., Mike :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Goldsmith Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 11:38 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A wonderful story/write. Love your line, "and nature speaks a language of her own." It does. Enjoy your win with blessings...................
Allison Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 10:22 AM
what wonderful imagery, many congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
Merryman Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 8:05 AM
Well written, with a touch of melancholy. Congrats on your POTD honor, Mike! Blessings, Kim M
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 7:14 AM
Lovely piece Mike, a fave for me. Congratulations on POTD! xomo
Mcintosh Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 6:05 AM
Love this. Wonderful words. God bless you and congrats on POTD. Love, Gina
La France Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 6:00 AM
Mike, beautiful, yes that last line is amazing and congratulations on receiving a deserving POEM OF THE DAY, enjoy the honor _Constance
Edmonds  Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 5:48 AM
An inspiring write Mike, wonderful words, I love that last line, “nature speaks a language of her own.” Congratulations on poem of the day… Belle
Kitchin Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 4:45 AM
Love the imagery, congratulations on POTD!
Balasubramanian Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 12:38 AM
Beautiful yet though provoking, congratulations on your well deserved Potd. Enjoy the honour friend
Dietrich Avatar
July 7, 2021 at 12:12 PM
I LOVE your style. A fave on this one.
Buhagiar Avatar
July 6, 2021 at 11:23 PM
At 7.00 am it is already 80 F. I shudder at what it will be at noon. O breeze where are you hiding?
Sands Avatar
July 6, 2021 at 2:11 PM
This is absolutely beautiful. Well written. A Fave for me. :)
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