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Sweet Breeze

The sweet breeze through the window asks nothing as unseen birds call. It asks nothing of the sun as it sweeps across yards, yet it whispers to waking dreams. My dreams ask, Did I love too much? behind my mind’s eye, visions and what do they mean when we give of ourselves so fully we are spent. Now I’m alone. Canadian geese gather crowding a path along the river as the day passes, so consumed with each other they ignore the mothers and children who pass. A ski jet slaps waves, and the river breathes. The gaggle whispers among itself, and nature speaks a language of her own.

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Date: 5/8/2024 12:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Mike. Well written. Great title too!
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Date: 5/7/2024 5:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. We have Canada Geese who live here year-round now for some reason. Today I noticed that there were about 8 to 12 babies with the group waddling around. Sara K
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Date: 7/12/2021 7:55:00 AM
All in the breath of breeze...Lovely one. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 7/8/2021 10:57:00 PM
Very nice indeed...
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Date: 7/8/2021 10:23:00 PM
My congrats for POTD. Loved your poem.
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Date: 7/8/2021 5:37:00 PM
Beautiful, clear scene! I can see it play out right before my eyes! Congrats on achieving POTD.
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Date: 7/8/2021 5:12:00 PM
A *Sweet breeze* can create a tender moment, a beautiful mood. It can also leave the heart searching for more. Your thoughts caress softly around me. Congratulations Mike, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. ~ Brandy
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Date: 7/8/2021 3:03:00 PM
Congratulations on a beautiful poem! "nature speaks a language of her own" - very true. You have painted an engrossing picture of nature. BW ~ Mala
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Date: 7/8/2021 1:39:00 PM
Congrats on POTD and a very interesting and different poem! Really loved it!
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Date: 7/8/2021 1:00:00 PM
- Congratulations on your lovely p.o.t.d., Mike :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/8/2021 11:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A wonderful story/write. Love your line, "and nature speaks a language of her own." It does. Enjoy your win with blessings...................
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Date: 7/8/2021 10:22:00 AM
what wonderful imagery, many congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/8/2021 8:05:00 AM
Well written, with a touch of melancholy. Congrats on your POTD honor, Mike! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/8/2021 7:14:00 AM
Lovely piece Mike, a fave for me. Congratulations on POTD! xomo
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Date: 7/8/2021 6:05:00 AM
Love this. Wonderful words. God bless you and congrats on POTD. Love, Gina
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Date: 7/8/2021 6:00:00 AM
Mike, beautiful, yes that last line is amazing and congratulations on receiving a deserving POEM OF THE DAY, enjoy the honor _Constance
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Date: 7/8/2021 5:48:00 AM
An inspiring write Mike, wonderful words, I love that last line, “nature speaks a language of her own.” Congratulations on poem of the day… Belle
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Date: 7/8/2021 4:45:00 AM
Love the imagery, congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 7/8/2021 12:38:00 AM
Beautiful yet though provoking, congratulations on your well deserved Potd. Enjoy the honour friend
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Date: 7/7/2021 12:12:00 PM
I LOVE your style. A fave on this one.
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Date: 7/6/2021 11:23:00 PM
At 7.00 am it is already 80 F. I shudder at what it will be at noon. O breeze where are you hiding?
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Date: 7/6/2021 2:11:00 PM
This is absolutely beautiful. Well written. A Fave for me. :)
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