Sweet Bliss

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Bliss under the roof of the scarlet sky; a couple enjoy the evening zephyr, watching synchronizing flock of starlings. A stunning view! They kiss now and then; sweet. Double Tetractys 4 Poetry Contest (Winner: 1st Place) Sponsored by Eve Roper Date written: 10/08/2020

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Susan Ashley

Date: 10/17/2020 2:40:00 PM

Your imagery is sweet bliss, indeed! Such beautiful moments spill from your gifted pen, Edward. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Eve's contest.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2020 7:11:00 PM

So so lovely, Edward. A big congrats on your win.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/16/2020 9:24:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea:-) Remain blessed.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/16/2020 8:33:00 AM

- Congratulations on your admirable win poem, Edward :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/16/2020 2:00:00 PM

Thank you very much, Anne-Lise:-) Have a great weekend as well!

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 10/15/2020 7:34:00 PM

What a view, what a moment... Amazing Imagery. This is indeed a beautiful write. You must have enjoyed writing this sweet poem. Congratulations on you win.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/16/2020 2:16:00 AM

Thank you so much, Paghunda:-) I appreciate your wonderful comments!