Edward Ibeh Poet Tetractys

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Sweet Bliss

Bliss
under 
the roof of
the scarlet sky;
a couple enjoy the evening zephyr,
watching synchronizing flock of starlings.
A stunning view!
They kiss now 
and then;
sweet.


Double Tetractys 4 Poetry Contest (Winner: 1st Place)
Sponsored by Eve Roper
Date written: 10/08/2020

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Susan Ashley October 17, 2020 at 2:40 PM Your imagery is sweet bliss, indeed! Such beautiful moments spill from your gifted pen, Edward. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Eve's contest.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich October 16, 2020 at 7:11 PM So so lovely, Edward. A big congrats on your win. Edward Ibeh October 16, 2020 at 9:24 PM Thank you so much, Andrea:-) Remain blessed.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 16, 2020 at 8:33 AM - Congratulations on your admirable win poem, Edward :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Edward Ibeh October 16, 2020 at 2:00 PM Thank you very much, Anne-Lise:-) Have a great weekend as well!

Paghunda Zahid October 15, 2020 at 7:34 PM What a view, what a moment... Amazing Imagery. This is indeed a beautiful write. You must have enjoyed writing this sweet poem. Congratulations on you win. Edward Ibeh October 16, 2020 at 2:16 AM Thank you so much, Paghunda:-) I appreciate your wonderful comments!

Linda Alice Fowler October 15, 2020 at 7:09 PM Lovely imagery Edward. Congratulations on the win! Linda Edward Ibeh October 16, 2020 at 2:15 AM Thanks very much, Linda:-)

Eve Roper October 15, 2020 at 6:24 PM Congratulations on your win, Edward, love your imagery in your poem. Thank you for participating in my Tetractys contest. Hugs Eve Edward Ibeh October 16, 2020 at 2:14 AM Oh wow, thank you for much for my high placement, Eve!:-) Most obliged.

Regina Mcintosh October 9, 2020 at 6:13 AM Sweet indeed. Bless you Edward Ibeh October 9, 2020 at 6:42 AM Thank you, Regina:-) Blessings to you, too!