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Sweet As Pie

Growing up together for a short while in my home a daycare setting over the moon a sort of swoon after a holiday break Ronnie and Zach attack each other’s lips with a kiss sweet as pie it’s still in my mind’s eye i saw Ronnie at the library when i first started there she was a teen i recognized the street she lived on from off her i.d. i saw Zach on t.v. he was in a dancing contest i remember his candy frenzy he was like the energizer bunny and there he was with a girl in his arms not his first love i knew who that was 3/11/2023

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Date: 3/17/2023 12:57:00 AM
Hi Kim yes I have neglected all my good friends but believe me you are always on my mind - must answer Kim - must answer Kim but weeks fly by and it's the next month already I'm so sorry yet VERY happy to hear from you teenage romances are puppy love but meet that person 20 Years later and your heart flips! Hugs and blessing sweet friend . Hugs and blessings Jennifer
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/17/2023 6:17:00 AM
Thank you for letting me know that you care! That means a great deal, my friend!
Date: 3/12/2023 10:54:00 PM
Lovely memories... ! When people mature prefrences change and love too grows from 'puppy love' to a permanent affair. Beautiful poem, dear Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/13/2023 5:40:00 AM
Truly! Thank you, Valsa! <3
Date: 3/12/2023 7:21:00 PM
Ha, ha! Carve their initials in a tree, inside a heart. ~ Furtive Frank
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/12/2023 8:09:00 PM
I love that!
Date: 3/12/2023 12:15:00 PM
Interesting, imagery and story, Kim. Really liked it.. Pangie
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/12/2023 8:10:00 PM
Thank you, Pangie! :)
Date: 3/12/2023 9:12:00 AM
Enjoyed reading. So funny how we start young with friends and ideas then change as we grow older.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/12/2023 11:17:00 AM
So true!
Date: 3/12/2023 6:36:00 AM
It was a pleasure to read this. It's fascinating to see how individuals develop their independence and discover new lovers, but I am constantly wondering if the memory of their initial romantic happiness ever fades.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/12/2023 11:16:00 AM
Me too, my friend!
Date: 3/12/2023 6:14:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one. Amazing how people go their own ways and find someone new, but I always wonder if that first love remains in their heart forever. Thanks for sharing this one and for visiting my page. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/12/2023 11:16:00 AM
I too wonder! Are our days of youth just for learning or do they mean more? Do we remember when we are in eternity?

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