Sweet and Sour

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~ soft petals of warm skin I taste their tang sour. your nectar like honey my opiate sweet. ~ ~ 3rd Place ~ in the "Light Up The Page" Poetry Contest, Joseph May, Judge & Sponsor. (Syllables counted at HowManySyllables.com)

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Jan Allison

Date: 3/10/2019 6:38:00 PM

very sensual Greg, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/9/2019 8:26:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem: Sweet and sour, Gregory :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/6/2019 3:42:00 AM

So delicate, light, dainty, and scrumptiously delightful, Greg.