Gregory Richard Barden Poet Lanterne

Notes About The Poem

Sweet and Sour

~

soft
petals
of warm skin
I taste their tang
sour.

your
nectar
like honey
my opiate
sweet.

~




~ 3rd Place ~  in the "Light Up The Page" Poetry Contest, Joseph May, Judge & Sponsor.

(Syllables counted at HowManySyllables.com)

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Jan Allison March 10, 2019 at 6:38 PM very sensual Greg, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen March 9, 2019 at 8:26 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem: Sweet and sour, Gregory :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caren Krutsinger March 6, 2019 at 3:42 AM So delicate, light, dainty, and scrumptiously delightful, Greg.