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Sweet and Sappy

Sweet and sappy, as strawberries, yet the green leaf’s pulled from the tongue, and teaches one a smile set in the bulk and brazen of the hefty sour’n sweet fruitiness obtained from the C of the blazing sun’s goodness. Plentiful teeny-tiny seeds present in the plush red-ripe chill to the gums, and pearly-wide teeth that plunge, as if into the neck of Dracula’s victim. Juice sucked off fingers. The index circles the lips to enhance the stickiness and satisfaction of the plucky fragaria, full-sized, squeezing the frame. Dimensions hypnotize the dreamer destined for the horizon. Scented lip gloss, a lasso for a boyfriend. The milkshake mesmerizes the swirly straw in the parlor. Memories made shepherding the wild strawberry fields - hair, cheeks, lips, polish.

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Date: 2/11/2024 11:20:00 AM
Such a sweet and beautiful poem. I love the line "Scented lip gloss, a lasso for a boyfriend". Great job, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/12/2024 9:16:00 AM
Thank you, Shane! Glad you liked that line :)
Date: 2/5/2024 4:56:00 PM
This is amazing writing. Strawberries a "chill" in gums...and the end- just wow! :)
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Date: 2/3/2024 10:51:00 PM
Nice "fruity" sweet poem, Kim. The title said it well, sweet and sappy. Have a pleasant Sunday, my friend. Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/4/2024 1:05:00 PM
Happy Sunday, dear Bill!
Date: 2/3/2024 5:06:00 PM
this was a 'mouthwatering' poem, Kim...wonderful images and I could easily imagine eating the strawberries. Smacking my lips now :-)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/3/2024 6:09:00 PM
Yay! :)
Date: 2/3/2024 1:32:00 PM
Such a juicy and delicious poem, Kim. It fills the senses in so many ways. I can't wait til I see the blossoms in May!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/3/2024 6:05:00 PM
Thank you, David! We always look forward to Spring :)
Date: 2/3/2024 10:34:00 AM
I love how your poem is a delightful ode to the sensory pleasures of strawberries, inviting the reader to savor each juicy detail with relish. The imagery of strawberries as "sweet and sappy" with "hefty sour'n sweet fruitiness" paints a vivid picture of their luscious appeal.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/3/2024 11:44:00 AM
Thank you so much for your delightful comment!
Date: 2/3/2024 7:45:00 AM
I kind of have to wipe my chin after reading this! A lovely juicy, tangible description. Mouth-watering in it's poetic brilliance. (vampires should swap to strawberries from blood after reading this for sure) Delightful. Nothing more to say x
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/3/2024 8:41:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sam!

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