Sweet and Romantic

It was just another , ordinary day
quite boring, some people would say
and her hair was a mess, and old jeans as her dress
and she'd just done dishes, fed up, she'd confessed

after his hard day at work, another room records playing
and she had no idea , what the singers were saying
then he came into kitchen,  and held her so tight
then kissed both her eyes, so very, very light

he sang her a song ,  while he looked into eyes
but she was so very, very puzzeled, as to the reason why
she couldn't hear much what the song had been saying
for she paid no attention, to the music that was playing

she had smudges on her face , from deep oven cleaning
and the floor needed mopping, that she kept on so meaning
and her hair such a mess and her ripped jeans as her dress
and she had been feeling fed up, she'd have to confess

and it was only much later, she took up the time
to read up the lyrics............ that to her,  he did mime.

*true story....
poem to my husband, l love you so much x

Guns and Roses- Sweet Child of Mine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 7/26/2025 10:10:00 PM
Dear Jacqueline, a beautiful poem, so beautiful and romantic. I love how your feelings are reflecting through your words. A heart melting write. I'm so glad I read it. Your unique style is very brilliant! Best, Anne
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