Sweet Abuse of Our Privacy

Just half a meter away is this semi-covered female
so fertile for a score of trees to grow on
smooth and soft, curvy and oily
a rich landscape for my longings to become playful penguins.
Her body’s map has been possessed by my hunger
and a split second is too long for our disappearance from door to bed
as the tiles beat my wardrobe to claim the auction of our flying clothes.

Fierce and aggressive, every act is industrialized for pain to taste sweet
a little harm is not unhealthy, let a smile show from the thorn’s tip
biting but patting softly; modesty, the only crime
pinning down and licking through, respect, out of bound
sharp pinching and slow tickling; legality is completely unwanted
summing up an erotic wrestling as intimate as the coiling of wires.

Tightly cornered ‘V’ in front, roundly curved ‘W’ behind
I gradually rise erectly, facing the clouds from under
to honour this beautiful respect towards the pattern of the english alphabets.
Muscles gliding over muscles
joints clicking in a uniform rhythm
produced fluids, keeping both souls sticky
love on stage and now in full display.

Sounds from raging hearts, dancing furniture, bullied foam
all in one competitive race.
Skins on fire for desires to completely burn
so hard, gets inside so wet; 
everything else is then subjected to a bouncing and stretching symphony.
It is nothing but refreshing
to abuse our privacy and change the colours of its secrecy;
mourn all night my love and let our instincts ride this luxurious yacht.

Published: 6/25/2020
For the Sensuality Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Silent One

Placement: 2nd (7/1/2020)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kiser Avatar
August 13, 2020 at 5:42 PM
Marvelously sensual imagery and feeling to this Funom; congratulations on your win!
Mishra Avatar
July 5, 2020 at 2:23 PM
This is really creative Funom! Articulated imagery in your muse. Congratulations on your win :)
Makama Avatar
July 17, 2020 at 6:14 AM
Thank you so much Aditi.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 5:39 AM
I need a shower now so thank you for that!
Makama Avatar
July 17, 2020 at 6:14 AM
Whoooosh! Whooosh! And the rain drops spill like humid clouds in droplets of warm honey, sliding through your skin with the touch of a dove's feather. As the shower pours, its sounds call your name to peep through the bathroom window to see the rainbow encircling the sun in a navy-blue evening. Thank you for your comment Caren.
Deepa Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 5:31 AM
Hello Funom sir, I must say it's completely spicy & erotic.Each lines spills sensuality.:-)Enjoyed your poem throughly.Cogratulations on your well deserved wonderful win.Keep writing.Keep inspiring.:-) Warmest regards~Deepa
Makama Avatar
July 17, 2020 at 6:11 AM
Thank you so much V. Deepa
One Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 5:03 PM
Very hot and sensual my friend.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Makama Avatar
July 17, 2020 at 6:10 AM
Thank you so much Silent one, I appreciate your placement
Pandit Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 10:25 AM
Very romantic, sensuous rendering, Funom--all the best.
Makama Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 4:56 PM
Thank you so much Vijay Pandit
Adams Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 3:07 PM
a wonderful sensual write my friend, best wishes in the contest... your muse was on fire with this one...
Makama Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 3:20 PM
thank you so much Sandra... Thank you
Lamoureux Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 10:15 AM
It’s getting hot in here! This is sensuality to the next level. I expect it will do very well.
Makama Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 3:21 PM
Thank you so much Richard
Romios Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 7:24 AM
Totally awesome, dear poet, what talent you have with your pen! A FAV on this. PR xo
Makama Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 3:21 PM
Thank you so much Pangiota Romios
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