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Sweet-Er Sensation

Underneath, you above, Hold me close,like a glove, You whisper my name,"yes love", Meant to be,white doves.... You lean forward, I lean back, You pull my jeans,I lift your top, You bite your lips,I hit the spot, We tremble like leaves,and then collapse...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/18/2012 1:41:00 AM
This is sweet I like it a lot. : ) LUV~Sammie~
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Richard Palmer
Date: 9/21/2012 3:53:00 PM
thanks Samantha,luv Sammie
Date: 7/30/2012 10:01:00 AM
Sweet passion.....excellent write!
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/30/2012 11:03:00 AM
thanks Cecilia
Date: 6/18/2012 5:47:00 PM
We tremble like leaves..great phrase!! steamy rhyme..Light & Love
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/19/2012 3:06:00 PM
thanks Debbie
Date: 6/12/2012 1:21:00 AM
Soothing!
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/12/2012 5:01:00 AM
thanks Bhavna
Date: 6/9/2012 6:04:00 AM
Beautiful Write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing Richard.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/9/2012 6:28:00 AM
thanks Ravi,happy you did
Date: 6/5/2012 6:03:00 PM
Wow I like it :3
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/6/2012 8:32:00 AM
thanks Hanna,happy to please
Date: 6/3/2012 8:35:00 PM
Wow! exuberating excellence!
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/3/2012 8:58:00 PM
THANKS,Jesssica
Date: 6/2/2012 2:38:00 PM
Yes, indeed a sweet-er sensation, Richard!
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/2/2012 4:11:00 PM
i was gonna name it sweet-HER,lol,thanks Andrea
Date: 6/2/2012 8:44:00 AM
lol..loved it specially last verseve.. Jah' love!!! always...
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/2/2012 4:10:00 PM
thanks Carma,one love
Date: 6/1/2012 8:09:00 PM
Nice work Richard - I enjoyed greatly. Thanks for taking the time to read my work as well.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/1/2012 8:54:00 PM
thanks Anthony,you are welcome
Date: 6/1/2012 9:16:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your excellent writing this morning Richard. I hope you will continue to write and share your words with us for many years to come. Have a wonderful weekend filled with joy and love. Love, Carol
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/1/2012 4:50:00 PM
I will,thanks alot Carol
Date: 6/1/2012 8:00:00 AM
This is a classic piece of art you have here..enjoyed!! Very smooth!!
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/1/2012 4:50:00 PM
happy to please,Super Ink
Date: 6/1/2012 6:39:00 AM
oh wow nice one Richard xx
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/1/2012 7:09:00 AM
Golden Girl,thanks alot
Date: 6/1/2012 6:36:00 AM
Sweet and romantic poem Richard, love it. - Well done. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/1/2012 7:08:00 AM
always like keeping you happy,thanks Anne

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