Sweeping and Cleaning In Autumn Day

Sweeping and cleaning in autumn day:

Why is the sweeper sweating in cold ?
A place unstuffed is stuffed again.

Where comes the silly dirt?
Down the streets and up the trees.

What can now the sweeper do?
Sweeping not against the wind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gasun Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 2:34 AM
This is also such a splendid Autumn poem my dear friend Kayod. I love it so much and I enjoyed the read! My great honor sharing the great win with you. My warmest congratulations as well! TYTYSSM for sharing! May I also take this chance to thank you so mch for your precious time reading my work, your encouraging words etc. More blessings to you. Happy, happy New Year! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
Kayode Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 2:47 AM
Thank you very much my friend,nice having good people like you around, I wish you happy and a rewarding 2015 Leonora...huggs
Yvonne Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 7:33 PM
Congratulations on your fine win.
Kayode Avatar
December 30, 2014 at 5:50 AM
Compliment of the season Maurice and thanks for the visit...huggs
Lawless Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 5:13 PM
Well, this is a bit of a puzzler.....interesting couplets that beckon, as does fall, to linger a bit longer. Congrats on the win
Kayode Avatar
December 30, 2014 at 5:50 AM
Compliment of the season John and thanks for the visit...huggs
Chakrabarty Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 2:04 AM
Loved it Kayode.Congrats on win. Happy 2015 to you all.RAJAT
Kayode Avatar
December 30, 2014 at 5:53 AM
Compliment of the season and thanks you for the visit Rajat...huggs
Dietrich Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 11:03 PM
this is a unique take on autumn!! Congrats for your win, my friend.
Kayode Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 11:31 PM
Thank you Andrea.
May Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 7:38 PM
Congrats on a great win Kayode
A   Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 6:30 PM
Kayod5, Thank you for commenting on my comment. I want to take this time and wish you a wonderful New Year. I'm making this my year of new hopes and new opportunities. I have a good feeling, 2015 will be one of Poetry Soups Brighter and Better Years. Sending warm hugs. Always & Forever Linda
Sietesantos Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 4:04 PM
Hi Kayode, you deserve this wonderful win! Totally captivating, excellent write that I enjoyed reading! Best wishes, Pandita.
Callus Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 3:47 PM
Witty and clever take on this autumn theme, Kayode! Well done! #7 Congratulations on a deserved win...a podium finish!!! /x/ paul
Allison Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 10:22 AM
I love your unique take on the theme - congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
Kayode Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 10:27 AM
Thank you Jan for this message,I am happy Linda and you love it...huggs
A   Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 10:10 AM
Love it, Kayod5, Congratulations, on your win. Many enjoyable Autumn poem. Stop by my latest blog "Autumn's Gown" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Kayode Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 10:17 AM
Thank you Linda for your efforts and my placement,this is a great honour done me and I am all joy for it. I shall visit your blog now and acquaint myself with latest in town...huggs
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