Beautiful Scars Poet Rhyme

Sweep Me Away, My Love-Solitary Moments Contest

Solitary Moments Contest
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Sweep me away, my love, into the blue shores of the east,
   Seize my sorrow as you reach for my delicate heart,
      I have listened alone to the tunes that carry my release,
         you have allowed my soul searching wonder to light its spark.

Sweep me away, my love, let us sail to our own island,
   Let me concentrate on taking your height to pleasure,
      I don't need any gold and wouldn't accept any diamonds,
         but the core of your chest shall be my greatest treasure.

Sweep me away, my love, as we share delicate moments,
   A gentle kiss on my forehead will set off my desire,
      Creating sweet sounds of love with a euphony of instruments,
         For only you, my sweet man, know how to light my fire.

Sweep me away, my love, up our mountain in the sky,
   Feel my body yearn for you as we climb up to the peak,
      My body tingling with anticipation on a natural high,
         Shhhhh...let's be quiet tonight, there's no need to speak.

Sweep me away, my love, towards our life of forever,
   For you are my radiance of light, my greatest endeavor.

~I was listening to the song "Absence of Fear" by Jewel while writing this poem~

~Date Written: February 3, 2016~

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Lin Lane February 9, 2016 at 1:50 PM Well written, Luloo...so congratulations to you! Beautiful Scars February 9, 2016 at 2:59 PM Thank you very much Lin, sweet lovely lady :) -luloo *thanks*

Daniel Turner February 9, 2016 at 1:28 PM Back to say I told you so! Congratulations, Luloo. Peace Beautiful Scars February 9, 2016 at 2:58 PM You're silly Daniel, thank you very much..-luloo *smiles*

Andrea Dietrich February 4, 2016 at 4:02 PM I would say you were VERY romantically inspired for the writing of this awesome poem! Beautiful Scars February 5, 2016 at 8:09 AM Thank you lovely lady Andrea :) *Smiles* -luloo

CayCay Godwin February 4, 2016 at 1:46 AM Lovely and romantic, Laura - well written and touching ... CayCay (I love your picture) Beautiful Scars February 4, 2016 at 1:27 PM Thank you CayCay!!! I miss you :)-luloo Hope all is well :):):)

Daniel Turner February 3, 2016 at 6:22 PM The muse of a wonderful marriage and a loving husband could only produce such feelings of love. Flows very well and invites one to continue, Extremely passionate. I see a winner's circle beyond! Beautiful Scars February 3, 2016 at 7:53 PM Daniel, I apologize, I meant to say thank you Daniel, please forgive me. Thank you very deeply for your support and always being so sweet to me. You are a true gem!! God bless Daniel and have a blessed night :) *Smiles* -luloo Beautiful Scars February 3, 2016 at 6:27 PM Thank you very much Frederic :)-luloo

Frederic Parker February 3, 2016 at 5:37 PM to accept no gold or diamonds only a heart is true love..good luck in the contest

Jan Allison February 3, 2016 at 3:52 PM WOW the sensual imagery is breathtaking LuLoo I am sure your hubby will be blown away when he reads this stunning romantic poem:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7 Beautiful Scars February 3, 2016 at 4:30 PM Thank you lady :) *smiles* -luloo